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Band 4+: The bar chart gives information about the number of overseas Japanese tourists between 1985 and 1995, and the line graph illustrates percentage of those going to Australia between 1985 and 1994.

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The image contains a bar chart showing 'Japanese tourists travelling abroad' (in millions) and a line graph showing 'Australia's share of Japan's tourist market' (percentage). The number of Japanese tourists travelling abroad was: ~4.9 million in 1985, ~5.5 in 1986, ~6.8 in 1987, ~8.4 in 1988, ~9.6 in 1989, ~11.0 in 1990, ~10.7 in 1991, ~11.8 in 1992, ~12.1 in 1993, ~13.5 in 1994, and ~15.4 in 1995. The percentage of these tourists going to Australia was: 2.0% in 1985, 3.0% in 1986, 4.0% in 1987, ~4.8% in 1988, ~4.2% in 1989, ~4.8% in 1990, ~5.2% in 1991, ~5.6% in 1992, ~6.2% in 1993, and 6.0% in 1994.

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The bar chart illustrates the amount of Japanese tourists traveling abroad over a ten-year period (1985-1995), and the line graph shows the percentage of those traveling to Australia between 1984 and 1994.

Overall, the numbers of traveling abroad changed sharply during the ten years. The percentage of coming to Australia had there fluctuations in tourist market.

According to the first chart in 1985 total 5 millions visitors then every year the number increased consistently half million in four years. In 1990 visitors grow approximately 1,5 millions, while the next year this figure increased 0,5 millions. The vacationers in 1995 increased to 14,5 millions.

As for Australia’s share of Japanese’s tourist market in 1985 according two millions visitors. During four years from 1985 to 1988 rose steadily one million, while the next year fall in the same number. In 1990 again steadily growing rose, which was the numeral reached to 5,5 million and finally in 1994 accounted to six million.

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The report addresses the task, but there are some inaccuracies and omissions. The description of the data lacks precision and clarity. To improve, focus on providing more accurate data references and ensure a clearer, more coherent description of the trends and figures presented in both charts. Also, pay attention to grammar and sentence structure for better clarity.

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The report demonstrates some organization, but the progression of ideas is not always clear. The 'overall' paragraph is present but could be more insightful. Transitions between sentences and paragraphs need improvement to enhance the flow of information. Consider using cohesive devices more effectively to link ideas and ensure a smoother reading experience.

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The vocabulary used is somewhat limited and repetitive. There is an attempt to use descriptive language, but it lacks precision and sophistication. To improve, try to incorporate a wider range of vocabulary related to trends and data analysis. Focus on using synonyms and more specific terms to describe changes and quantities.

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The report contains several grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses, subject-verb agreement issues, and awkward phrasing. Sentence structures are relatively simple, and there is a lack of complex sentence constructions. To enhance grammatical accuracy, carefully proofread your work and focus on mastering basic grammar rules. Practice using a variety of sentence structures to improve the overall quality of your writing.

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Band 4+: The bar chart gives information about the number of overseas Japanese tourists between 1985 and 1995, and the line graph illustrates percentage of those going to Australia between 1985 and 1994.

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