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Band 5+: The Bar Chart shows CO2 emissions for different forms of transport in the European Union. The Pie Chart shows the percentage of European Union funds being spent on different forms of transport. You should write at least 150 words. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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The image contains two visual elements: a bar chart and a pie chart. The bar chart illustrates grams of CO2 per passenger-kilometer for various modes of transportation: Passenger cars (140), Buses (70), Coaches (20), Maritime (20), Rail (30), and Air (380). The pie chart depicts percentages for various transportation infrastructures: Roads (52%), Railways (31%), Public transport (10%), Intermodal (2%), Inland waterway (1%), Ports (1%), Airports (1%), and Unknown (2%).

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The given chart delineates the information about the variety of transportation which emits Co2 , while the pie chart shows the percentage of European funds which is being spent on transportation.

In general the data reveals that, majority of the Co2 is emitted by the air. However, Coaches, maritime and rails emits less gram of CO2 per persons.

More than 350 grams of CO2 per passenger is emitted by the air. However, passenger cars leads by seconds with more than 100 emissions per passenger. Additionally, buses, coaches, maritime, and rail emits in very less number i.e. less than 50.

In terms of funds spent on different transportations, majority of the amount is spent on construction of roads which is around more than half i.e. 52%. Followed by railways, 31% fund is spent on constructing railways. Only 10% money is spent on public transportations. However, only 1% each fund is raised on intermodal, inland waterways and airports and 2% each for ports and unknown.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

spent: 5

which: 3

emits: 3

however: 3

passenger: 3

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Task Response

The report covers the main features of both charts and provides an overview. However, there are some inaccuracies (e.g., 'more than 350 grams' for air, 'more than 100' for cars) and omissions (e.g., exact values for buses, coaches, maritime, rail). The structure is clear, but the language could be more precise. To improve, ensure accurate data representation and avoid vague phrases like 'very less number'.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a logical structure, with separate paragraphs for the bar chart and pie chart. However, the flow is sometimes disrupted by awkward phrasing and unclear connections between ideas. For example, the transition from the bar chart to the pie chart could be smoother. The use of cohesive devices is limited and sometimes repetitive (e.g., 'However' is used multiple times). To improve, use a wider range of linking words and phrases (e.g., 'In contrast', 'Similarly', 'Regarding') and ensure each paragraph has a clear central topic. The overall message is still understandable, but the cohesion could be more sophisticated.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is adequate but lacks range and precision. There are some inaccuracies, such as 'emits less gram' (should be 'emit fewer grams') and 'fund is raised on' (should be 'funds are allocated to'). The report relies on basic terms like 'majority', 'leads by seconds', and 'very less number'. To improve, incorporate more specific and varied vocabulary (e.g., 'predominantly', 'substantially higher', 'minimal emissions', 'allocated', 'invested'). Avoid informal phrases like 'leads by seconds' and use more formal academic language. The lexical resource is sufficient for the task but not sophisticated.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors and awkward structures that affect clarity. Examples include subject-verb agreement issues ('funds which is being spent' should be 'funds which are being spent'), incorrect plural forms ('emits less gram' should be 'emit fewer grams'), and missing articles ('majority of the Co2' should be 'the majority of CO2'). Sentence structures are mostly simple, with limited use of complex sentences. To improve, practice using a mix of simple, compound, and complex sentences, and pay attention to subject-verb agreement, article usage, and plural forms. Proofreading for common errors would significantly enhance accuracy.

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