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Band 4+: The bar chart shows the number of hours men and women spent on different tasks on average per day in 2011.

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The image features a bar chart comparing the average daily hours spent by men and women on various tasks in 2011: work (men 8, women 6), go shopping (men 2, women 4), do household chores (men 3, women 4), take care of children (men 2, women 5), sleep (men 7.5, women 8), others (men 4.5, women 3).

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The bar chart compares the number of time spent male and female on different tasks on average per day in 2011.

Overall, the highest number of hour spent male in working sector, while the number of hours spent on go shopping was the lowest in the given year.

In term of spending hours, working was the most popular sector in 2011, with women 8 hours and it increased to almost 9 hours to men. Similarly spending hours in household chores department rose in from just over to 2 hours to alittle less than 3 hours an increase of nearly 1 hours following the year 2011.

For the remaining, in 2011 sleep and take of children sector male spent 1 hours and 6 hours female spent just over 1 hours and less than 3 hours respectively. On the other hand,others sectors male & female spent hours partial’ 5 hours in male and 3 hours in female.

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spent: 6

female: 4

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Task Response

The report attempts to address the task but contains significant inaccuracies and omissions. The overall trend is mentioned, but specific data is often incorrect or unclear (e.g., 'women 8 hours' for work, 'male spent 1 hours' for sleep). The report also lacks a clear structure and fails to cover all categories accurately. To improve, ensure all data is correctly reported, use clear comparisons, and organize the information logically with an overview and specific details.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report attempts to organize information but lacks clear progression and logical flow. The introduction is brief, and the overview is vague. The body paragraphs mix data without clear grouping, and the use of cohesive devices is limited and sometimes inaccurate. Paragraphing is not effectively managed, and the reader may struggle to follow the comparison. To improve, structure the report with a clear introduction, an overview of main trends, and body paragraphs that group related tasks (e.g., work and chores, leisure and care). Use a range of linking words and referencing to enhance coherence.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is limited and repetitive, with some inappropriate word choices (e.g., 'spending hours', 'partial'). There is an attempt to use synonyms, but accuracy is lacking. The report would benefit from a wider range of precise vocabulary related to data description (e.g., 'approximately', 'slightly higher', 'significant difference'). Use collocations correctly and avoid informal or vague expressions. Improve by learning task-specific vocabulary and practicing paraphrasing. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors and punctuation issues that impede understanding. There are problems with subject-verb agreement, articles, prepositions, and sentence structure. For example, 'the number of time spent male' should be 'the amount of time spent by men'. The report also lacks variety in sentence structures, relying on simple and sometimes incorrect constructions. To improve, focus on grammar fundamentals, proofread carefully, and practice writing complex sentences with accurate punctuation.

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