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Band 4+: The bar chart shows the percentages of the Canadian workforce in five major industries in 1850 and 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image is a bar graph depicting the percentage of Canadian workforce in five industries, comparing the years 1850 and 2020. The manufacturing industry had 36% in 1850, and 9% in 2020. The services industry increased from 33% to 81%. Agriculture/fishing decreased from 22% to 1%. Construction increased from 1% to 5%. Energy/Water had 8% in 1850 and 3% in 2020.

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The chart illustrate the percentage of Canadian workforce in manufacturing, services, agriculture/fishing, construction and energy/water industry in the years 1850 and 2020.

Overall, in the years 1850 and 2020. Manufacturing and services are industry in which the greatest percentage of Canadian workforce respectively.

Firstly, in the year 1850. Percentage of Canadian workforce in manufacturing and services is around 34% which was the highest percentage among other. Where as in the year 2020 services was only the industry in which highest percentage of Canadian are engaged in followed by agriculture/ fishing in the year 1850 with 22%. Similarly, second highest in the year 2020 was manufacturing industry at 9%.

In both years 1850 and 2020.The percentage of Canadian workforce in construction and Energy/water industry were similar at below 10% and the least Canadian population were engaged in this industry among others in both years.

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percentage: 6

canadian: 6

industry: 6

workforce: 4

manufacturing: 4

services: 4

years: 4

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The main features are identified and compared, but there are some inaccuracies and omissions in the report. The comparison between the years is not consistently maintained. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is somewhat coherent, but there are issues with paragraphing and some repetition. Cohesion could be improved for better flow.

Lexical Resource

There is a range of vocabulary used, but some imprecise language and repetition affect the quality. More varied and accurate word choices would enhance the lexical resource.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

While a variety of structures are attempted, there are errors in sentence structure and tense consistency. More attention to grammar accuracy is needed.

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