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Band 5+: The bar chart shows the results of a survey, in which people in Europe and the USA were asked what they consider to be the most important factor in the success of a business. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image shows a bar chart comparing what people in Europe and the USA consider the most important factor in business success: political situation (USA: 5%, Europe: 10%), external factors (USA: 10%, Europe: 12%), personality of the director (USA: 20%, Europe: 45%), national economy (USA: 25%, Europe: 15%), and how the business is managed (USA: 40%, Europe: 18%).

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The Bar chart compares the information about the different factors responsible for the success of business which are Political situation, External factors, Personality of the Director, National economy and how the business is managed in both USA and Europe.

Overall, the management is the key for the success of business as in the survey it have the highest value for both the countries, while the external factor least affect the growth of the company.

Around 35% of people give more emphasize on the management of the business for the growth in both countries. In USA, dependency for the growth on personality of the director is around 35% in contrast for Europe it is only 20%. Then this is followed by the national economy as it is surveyed as 22% in Europe and 17% in USA. The dependency on external factor for growth is same for both the countries that is 8%. However, a huge difference is seen in political situation dependency, in which 17% in Europe and 5% in USA.

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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

business: 4

growth: 4

external: 3

countries: 3

dependency: 3

europe: 3

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Task Response

The report identifies some main features but contains inaccuracies in the data reported. The organization is acceptable, but the language could be more precise and accurate. To improve, focus on accurately representing the data from the chart and using more precise language to describe the trends and comparisons.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report lacks clear organization and paragraphing. The overview is weak and doesn't effectively summarize the main trends. The body paragraphs lack clear topic sentences and the information is not presented in a logical order. Improve the flow of information by using cohesive devices and organizing the data more effectively.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is basic and repetitive. There is limited use of precise language to describe the data. The report would benefit from a wider range of vocabulary related to business and economics. For example, instead of 'affect the growth,' consider using 'impact the expansion' or 'influence the profitability.'

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses, subject-verb agreement issues, and awkward phrasing. These errors affect the clarity and accuracy of the report. Focus on improving your understanding of basic grammar rules and sentence structure. Proofread carefully to identify and correct errors.

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