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Band 5+: The bar charts below give information about the railway system in six cities in Europe. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

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The image shows two bar graphs. The first graph labeled "Kilometers of Route" details the following data points: 1863 Paris - 394 km, 1900 Stockholm - 199 km, 1927 Lisbon - 155 km, 1976 Rome - 126 km, 1981 Madrid - 11 km, 2001 Berlin - 28 km. The second graph labeled "Passengers Per year (in millions)" features these data points: 1863 Paris - 775 million, 1900 Stockholm - 1191 million, 1927 Lisbon - 1927 million, 1976 Rome - 144 million, 1981 Madrid - 45 million, 2001 Berlin - 50 million.

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The diagram depicts the europe six major cities (Paris, Stockholm, Lisbon, Rome, Madrid and Berlin) railway system by kilometers of route and passengers per year (in millions) between 1863 to 2001

Overall, Paris had the longest route ever made in 1863 whereas, Lisbon has the highest number of passenger throughout the year. However Madrid had been lowest throught the year in term of both route and annual passenger.

To begin with, the oldest railways system which is build in Paris which is 394 kilometer long and had around 775 millions passgers annually. Madrid had the shortest route covering only 11 kilometer and only have near 45 million passengers in 1981.

Morever, in 1927 Lisbon railway serves approximately 1927 million passengers per year which had only 155 km long in length. Likewise, Stockholm is about 199 km long and have around 1191 passenger in 1990 per year. Quite similar to Madrid, Berlin also had the smallest route around 28 km and serves 50 million passengers per annual in 2001. With near 126 kilometer long route Rome railways system had only 144 million passengers annually.

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route: 6

passengers: 5

madrid: 4

million: 4

lisbon: 3

system: 3

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kilometer: 3

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Task Response

The report covers the main features of the bar charts and makes relevant comparisons. There are some minor inaccuracies in the data reported (e.g., Stockholm's year and passenger numbers), but overall, the response is well-organized and presents a clear overview of the information. To improve, ensure all data is accurately transcribed and consider a more sophisticated structure, perhaps grouping cities by similar characteristics or trends.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report demonstrates an adequate attempt to organize the information, but the flow could be improved. Paragraphing is generally present, but the transitions between ideas are not always smooth. The overall structure is discernible, but the writing would benefit from clearer signposting and more logical sequencing of information. For instance, grouping cities with similar characteristics together or discussing trends chronologically could enhance coherence.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is generally appropriate for the task, but there is room for improvement in terms of variety and precision. The report relies on some basic vocabulary. Incorporating a wider range of synonyms and more specific terminology related to railway systems and passenger numbers would enhance the lexical resource. For example, instead of 'longest route,' consider using 'extensive network' or 'most developed infrastructure.'

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains a mix of simple and complex sentence structures, but grammatical errors are noticeable and impact clarity. There are several instances of incorrect verb tense usage, subject-verb agreement issues, and awkward phrasing. While the overall meaning is usually clear, these errors detract from the report's overall quality. Focus on proofreading to identify and correct grammatical mistakes, and practice using a wider range of sentence structures accurately.

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