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Band 5+: The barchart illustrates the percentage of business in industry of Canada that are engaged in purchasing of ecommerce between 2015 to 2019.

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The image illustrates the proportion of businesses making e-commerce purchases in various Canadian industries from 2015 to 2019. In the Manufacturing sector, the percentages are 38% (2015), 49% (2016), 51% (2017), 63% (2018), and 74% (2019). Construction figures are 32% (2015), 34% (2016), 41% (2017), 50% (2018), and 59% (2019). Wholesale displays 55% (2015), 62% (2016), 64% (2017), 67% (2018), and 73% (2019). Retail percentages are 46% (2015), 51% (2016), 59% (2017), 67% (2018), and 70% (2019). Information & Communications show 66% (2015), 75% (2016), 78% (2017), 83% (2018), and 81% (2019). Each category progresses year by year with numerical data indicating the level of involvement in e-commerce purchasing within each industry annually.

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The bar chart showed the percentage of business in industry of Canada that are engaged in purchasing of ecommerce from 2015 to 2019.

Overall, it is evident that manufacturing, construction, wholesale, retail and information & communication increased significantly during the period. From 2015 onwards, the business of information and communication has the highest percentage. While, construction has the lowest percentage.

In 2015, the percentage of business of information and communication stood at roughly 60%. By contrast, at the same time the percentage of business of construction stood at approximatively 20%. Thereafter, the percentage of business of construction rose dramatically at almost 60% in the final year. Furthermore, the percentage of business of wholesale climbed steadily at around 60% at the end of period. In the other hand, in 2015 the percentage of business of retail increased considerably at nearby 50% before stabilizing until 2017.

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business: 7

construction: 4

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Task Response

The report addresses the task by describing the overall trend and some specific data points. However, there are inaccuracies in the data (e.g., 'roughly 60%' for Information & Communications in 2015 should be 66%, and 'approximatively 20%' for Construction in 2015 should be 32%). The description of trends is somewhat vague and lacks precise figures for all years. The structure is acceptable but could be more organized. To improve, ensure accurate data representation and provide a clearer overview with specific numbers for key points. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a basic structure but lacks clear progression and logical flow. The use of cohesive devices is limited and sometimes incorrect (e.g., 'While, construction' should be 'while construction'). Paragraphing is not effectively managed; the second paragraph mixes overall trends with specific data. To improve, organize the report into clear paragraphs: one for the overview and one for detailed analysis, using appropriate linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate but repetitive and imprecise (e.g., 'business of industry', 'purchasing of ecommerce'). There is some attempt at variation ('stood at', 'rose dramatically', 'climbed steadily'), but errors like 'approximatively' and 'nearby' reduce clarity. To improve, use a wider range of accurate and natural vocabulary, such as 'proportion', 'sector', 'e-commerce purchases', and 'approximately'. Avoid informal or incorrect terms.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors and awkward phrasing (e.g., 'showed' should be 'shows', 'are engaged' should be 'engaged', 'In the other hand' should be 'On the other hand'). Sentence structures are mostly simple, with limited use of complex forms. Punctuation is inconsistent. To improve, practice using a variety of sentence structures (e.g., relative clauses, conditionals) and ensure subject-verb agreement and correct prepositions. Proofread for errors.

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