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Band 5+: The chart below gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image displays a bar chart representing average weekly spending by families in 1968 and 2018. The chart is divided into seven categories; food, housing, fuel and power, clothing and footwear, household goods, personal goods, transport, and leisure. In 1968, spending on food was approximately 23%, housing 15%, fuel and power 10%, clothing and footwear 7%, household goods 6%, personal goods 5%, transport 10%, and leisure 8%. In 2018, spending on food decreased to roughly 15%, housing increased to 20%, fuel and power remained at 10%, clothing and footwear decreased to around 3%, household goods remained at 6%, personal goods decreased to roughly 2%, transport increased to approximately 15%, and leisure increased to about 12%.

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Comparing on how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018 is suprisingly interesting yet insightful thing to do.

Back in a days, families primerly spent most of their incomes for foods compared to nowadays. Followings are housing, clothing and foodware. Even though due to inflation housing got highly priced, families used to pay less in 1968. Yet, they spent almost doubled amouth on clothing and foodware than families in 2018 is quite unpredictable aspect.

On the other hand, Families living in 2018, spending mostly equivalent amounth of fortune on housing, transport and leisure since such things as house and transfort are got expencier than before. One interesting point is spending on leisure taking top spot of modern families account is indicating that people’s are become more tending to spend their family time as quality time.

Some things never change. For example, duel and power, household goods spending of both time period remains same.

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families: 6

spent: 3

their: 3

housing: 3

spending: 3

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The report addresses the task, but there are some areas for improvement. The organization could be clearer with a more distinct introduction, body, and conclusion. The language contains some inaccuracies and awkward phrasing. To improve, focus on using more precise vocabulary and varied sentence structures. Also, ensure that all comparisons are supported by specific data from the chart.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report demonstrates some organization, but the progression of ideas is not always clear. The introduction is weak, and the body paragraphs lack clear topic sentences. Transitions between ideas are often abrupt, hindering the flow of the report. Paragraphing could be improved to better group related information. To improve coherence and cohesion, focus on using clear topic sentences, logical transitions, and well-defined paragraphs.

Lexical Resource

The report uses a range of vocabulary, but there are instances of imprecise word choice and awkward phrasing ('Back in a days,' 'primerly spent,' 'foodware,' 'amouth,' 'transfort,' 'expencier,' 'duel'). Expanding your vocabulary and paying attention to collocation will enhance the clarity and sophistication of your writing. Focus on using more precise and natural-sounding language.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses, subject-verb agreement issues, and errors in article usage and spelling ('Comparing on,' 'Followings are,' 'families used to pay less,' 'people's are become'). These errors affect the clarity and accuracy of the report. To improve grammatical range and accuracy, focus on reviewing basic grammar rules, proofreading carefully for errors, and practicing sentence construction.

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