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Band 6+: The chart below gives information on the global sale of hybrid vehicles between 2006 and 2009. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant

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The image presents a bar chart titled "Global hybrid vehicle sales" with three sets of bars representing sales in 2006, 2007, and 2008 for the USA, Europe, and Japan; the vertical axis measures sales from 0 to 400,000 and the horizontal axis lists the regions; numerical data is not visible for each bar.

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The graph compares the number of hybrid vehicle sales during a 4-year period in three geographical areas.

As can be seen from the graph, the data on total sales in 2009 were twice as many as the number in 2006 as the level of all transport sales increased through distinctive patterns during the 4-year period.

In the year 2006, the greatest proportion of selling belonged to the United States in which vehicles were bought 250.000 on record while the figure in Japan and other countries shared the same number of sales at somewhere in the vicinity of 50,000 hybrid transports. While the US Sales trend fluctuated over the following two years, it remained the highest figure which stayed at 300 thousand, compared to both Japan and the others with about 100 thousand of sales.

Afterward, the commerce of transportation in the US fell to fewer than 300.000 in 2019 when the statistic in Japan rocketed to 350.000 and was the highest figure compared to the US and other which only rose by approximately 10.000 sales.

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The report identifies some main features but includes inaccuracies and makes some incorrect comparisons. The structure is present but could be improved with a clearer overview and more logical paragraphing. The report would benefit from more accurate data reporting and a clearer distinction between the trends in each region.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report demonstrates an attempt to organize information into paragraphs, but the flow of ideas could be improved. The introduction is adequate, but the subsequent paragraphs lack clear topic sentences and transitions, making it difficult to follow the comparisons and trends. For instance, the connection between the second and third paragraphs is not immediately apparent. To enhance coherence, consider using transitional phrases to link ideas and ensure each paragraph focuses on a specific aspect of the data.

Lexical Resource

The report uses a range of vocabulary, but some word choices are not entirely accurate or natural ('greatest proportion of selling belonged to,' 'commerce of transportation'). There are also instances of imprecise language ('somewhere in the vicinity of,' 'about 100 thousand'). To improve lexical resource, focus on using more precise and idiomatic language. Consider using synonyms and paraphrasing to demonstrate a wider vocabulary range, but ensure the words are used correctly in context.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report exhibits a mix of simple and complex sentence structures, but grammatical errors and awkward phrasing affect clarity. Examples include subject-verb agreement issues ('data on total sales in 2009 were twice as many as the number in 2006'), incorrect tense usage ('vehicles were bought 250.000 on record'), and unclear pronoun references. To enhance grammatical range and accuracy, carefully proofread for errors in grammar and sentence structure. Focus on using a variety of sentence types correctly and ensuring subject-verb agreement and correct tense usage.

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