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The image shows average snow depth by month for three years: November has 60 (year one), 90 (year two), 120 (year three); December has 130 (year one), 190 (year two), 160 (year three); January has 200 (year one), 250 (year two), 210 (year three); February has 400 (year one), 350 (year two), 425 (year three); March has 450 (year one), 320 (year two), 400 (year three); April has 375 (year one), 300 (year two), 450 (year three).

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The bar graph illustrates the deepness of snow in a specific ski resort in Canada in three years.

Overall, the snow height was significantly higher in the first year whereas the third year experienced a relatively lower snow depth compared to the second and the first years.

Statstics shown for the first year’s acccumulation of snow deepness ranged 100 cm from the second year’s ratio for the first three months with 100 in November, 40 cm higher in December and the exact 150 cm in January. However, thickness of snow demonstrated rapid growth outnumbering the third year’s accumulation during the next three months with about 450 in Februrary and March before witnessing a slight decrease in April to 400 cm.

In the third year, snow height in ski resort area was notably higher than that of first year’s figures particularly in Novemeber with 110 cm, 140 cm in December and 150 cm in January. However, the figures demonstrated a downward trend for the next three months by 330 in Februray and March before hitting even lower point of 300 in April. Moreover, year two’s accumulations regarding the deepness of snow were comparatively lower than the first and thrid year’s ratios depicting around 50 cm in November and December prior to hitting 100 cm in January. Interestingly, the figures rose significantly to 450 cm in April after showing 50 cm lower in February and March.

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first: 6

year's: 5

three: 4

lower: 4

deepness: 3

higher: 3

third: 3

months: 3

december: 3

january: 3

march: 3

april: 3

figures: 3

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Task Response

The report attempts to address the task by describing the snow depth data across three years, but it contains several inaccuracies and inconsistencies in the data presented, which detract from the overall clarity. The overview is present but could be more precise. The report would benefit from a clearer structure, more accurate data reporting, and careful proofreading to correct spelling errors (e.g., 'Statstics', 'acccumulation', 'Februrary', 'Novemeber') and improve grammatical accuracy. Additionally, ensure that comparisons between years are logically presented and supported by the data.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report attempts to present the data but the flow of information is somewhat disjointed. The overall trend is mentioned in the overview, but the subsequent paragraphs mix comparisons between years in a way that can be confusing. The use of cohesive devices is limited and sometimes inaccurate (e.g., 'Statstics shown for the first year's acccumulation...'). The paragraphing could be more logical, perhaps by dedicating one paragraph to each year or to clear comparisons. To improve, plan a clearer structure: introduce the graph, give an overview of the main trends, then describe the data for each year or month in a systematic way. Use linking words like 'in contrast', 'similarly', and 'while' to make comparisons clearer.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is somewhat repetitive and imprecise. For example, 'deepness' is not the standard term; 'depth' is more appropriate. Words like 'accumulation', 'ratios', and 'figures' are used but not always accurately. There are also spelling errors (e.g., 'Statstics', 'acccumulation', 'Februrary', 'Novemeber', 'thrid'). To improve, expand your range of topic-specific vocabulary (e.g., 'snowfall', 'snowpack', 'peak', 'decline', 'fluctuate'). Use synonyms to avoid repetition, such as 'data', 'measurements', 'readings'. Ensure correct spelling and word forms.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors and awkward phrasings that affect clarity. For instance, 'Statstics shown for the first year's acccumulation of snow deepness ranged 100 cm from the second year's ratio' is grammatically incorrect and unclear. There are issues with subject-verb agreement, missing articles, and incorrect prepositions. The sentence structures are often overly complex and run-on. To improve, focus on writing clear, simple sentences first. Check for basic grammar: use of 'the', correct verb tenses (past simple for describing data), and proper comparative structures (e.g., 'higher than', 'lower than'). Proofread carefully to eliminate spelling mistakes.

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