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Band 5+: the chart below shows the aid from six developed countries to developing countries from 2008 - 2010.

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The image depicts foreign aid in billion dollars from USA, UK, Germany, Japan, Netherlands, Sweden to developing countries in 2008-2010: USA: 2008 - 22, 2009 - 18, 2010 - 28; UK: 2008 - 10, 2009 - 8, 2010 - 11; Germany: 2008 - 10, 2009 - 12, 2010 - 10; Japan: 2008 - 9, 2009 - 10, 2010 - 11; Netherlands: 2008 - 7, 2009 - 7, 2010 - 6; Sweden: 2008 - 7, 2009 - 7, 2010 - 5.

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The bar chart compares the differences foreign aid from six developed countries from 2008 to 2010. The chart shows how much money this developed countries donated to foreign aid.

At all, all countries developed their aid slightly throughout the year, although some fluctuations can be seen. USA giving the highest amount of funding. While Sweden provided the least money by 2010.

Starting from 2008 the US donated approximately to 22 billion dollars, which increased to 25 billion by 2010. These numbers are nearly doubled compared to the countries like UK, Germany, and Japan. Additionally, Netherlands and Sweden gave the smallest amount of money, with minor changes amount of period.

To sum up, aid generally increased, but some countries did not follow a stable trend.

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countries: 5

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The report addresses the task requirements and provides a general overview of the data. However, there are some inaccuracies and omissions. For instance, the US donated 28 billion by 2010, not 25 billion. To improve, focus on providing more specific data points and ensuring accuracy. Also, consider including more comparative statements to highlight key trends and differences between countries. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report presents a general overview of the data, but the organization could be improved for better flow. Consider grouping countries based on their trends (e.g., those with increases vs. those with fluctuations). The 'At all' in the second paragraph is not appropriate. The transition between paragraphs could be smoother by using more varied cohesive devices.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate but could be more precise. For example, instead of 'developed their aid slightly,' you could use terms like 'increased their aid' or 'showed a marginal increase in aid.' Vary your language to describe the changes and amounts to avoid repetition.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There are noticeable grammatical errors that affect clarity. For instance, 'USA giving the highest amount of funding' should be 'USA gave the highest amount of funding.' Also, 'minor changes amount of period' is grammatically incorrect and should be rephrased (e.g., 'minor changes over the period'). Pay closer attention to verb tense consistency and sentence structure.

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