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Band 6+: The chart below shows the changes in UK's birth rate for women in six different age groups from 1973 to 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image shows UK birth rates per 1000 women from 1973 to 2008 for six age groups: 25-29 fluctuates from 114 (1973) to 120 (2008); 20-25 decreases from 140 (1973) to approximately 100 (2008); under 20 starts at 59 (1973) and declines to 40 (2008); 30-35 rises from 60 (1973) to 50 (1993) and peaks at 90 (2008); 35-39 ranges from 40 (1973) to 60 (2008); 40 and over increases slightly from approximately 4 (1973) to 20 (2008).

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The line graph illustrates changes in the birth rate of women in the UK across six age groups between 1973 and 2008.

Overall, women aged 25-29 had the highest birth rate for the overall period. In contrast, the birth rates for women aged 30-35 and 35-39 increased. The rates for women under 20, 20-24 and 40 and over generally decreased.

In 1973, the birth rate among women aged 25-29 was the highest, at around 138 births per 1,000 women. It then fell to about 120 in 1983, rose slightly to approximately 133 in 1993 and finally decreased to around 118 in 2008. Similarly, the figure for the 20-24 age group dropped steadily from about 123 to 93 births per 1,000 women during the period.

The birth rate for women aged 30-35 increased gradually from rough 70 in 1973 to about 84 in 2008. And more significant rise was saw among women aged 35-39, whose rate climb from around 38 to 64. By contrast, the rate for women under 20 declined from approximately 58 to 38 births per 1,000 women. Finally women aged 40 and over consistently recorded the lowest figures, falling slightly from about 18 to

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women: 12

birth: 5

about: 4

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births: 3

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Task Response

The report attempts to address the task and covers most age groups, but it is incomplete, ending abruptly mid-sentence. This significantly impacts the ability to provide a full summary of the data. Additionally, there are some inaccuracies in the overview; for example, the report states that the birth rate for women aged 40 and over generally decreased, whereas the visual description indicates an increase. To improve, ensure the report is finished completely and double-check that the trends described (increasing vs. decreasing) accurately reflect the data provided.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report follows a logical structure with a clear introduction, overview, and body paragraphs. However, the coherence is significantly hindered by the fact that the report is incomplete; it ends abruptly mid-sentence. To improve, ensure that all ideas are fully developed and that the conclusion or final data point is completed. Additionally, while transitions like 'In contrast' and 'Similarly' are used, some sentence connections could be smoother to avoid a slightly repetitive structure.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is generally appropriate for an academic report, with terms like 'illustrates', 'fluctuated', and 'consistently recorded' being used effectively. There is a good attempt to vary the language used for trends (e.g., 'dropped steadily', 'increased gradually'). To reach a higher band, aim for more sophisticated collocations and avoid minor phrasing issues such as 'from rough 70' (should be 'roughly 70'). Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report demonstrates a mix of simple and complex sentence structures, but there are several noticeable grammatical errors that affect the flow. For example, 'more significant rise was saw' should be 'a more significant rise was seen', and 'whose rate climb' should be 'whose rate climbed'. The most significant issue is the unfinished final sentence. Focus on subject-verb agreement and the correct use of past tense when describing historical data to improve accuracy.

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