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The image presents a horizontal bar chart showing values for various countries: Iran 56.7, Saudi Arabia 24.15, Iraq 14, United Arab Emirates 8.52, Yemen 6.91, Israel 6.64, Jordan 6.3, Syria 6.03, Lebanon 4.6.

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The following chart illustrates the number of Internet users in the Middle East countries. The information is provided for nine countries during the period of June 2017.

Overall, the popularity of the Internet varies significantly. The number of the Internet users is the highest in Iran – 56.7 million, and the lowest in Lebanon – 4.6 million.

Iran in leading the chart with 56.7 million active Internet users, followed by Saudi Arabia with around twice fewer. The only other country in the Middle East that has more than 10 million monthly Internet users is Iraq. Next is United Arab Emirates, which had 8.52 million of people who accessed the Internet in June 2017. The next four countries had around six to seven million of Internet users in the following period. The chart is completed with Lebanon with the lowest score of 4.6 million of those who had accessed the Internet.

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The report effectively summarizes the main features of the bar chart, providing a clear overview of internet usage across different Middle Eastern countries. The comparison between Iran and Saudi Arabia is well-noted, and the overall structure is logical. To further enhance the response, consider incorporating more specific comparisons between countries beyond the top two and bottom one, and ensure that all significant data points are addressed, even briefly.

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The report is generally well-organized and easy to follow. The overview paragraph provides a clear summary of the main trends. The body paragraphs present the data in a logical order, making relevant comparisons. To improve coherence, consider using a wider range of cohesive devices to link ideas more smoothly. For example, you could use transition words or phrases to connect sentences and paragraphs more effectively.

Lexical Resource

The report demonstrates a good range of vocabulary related to describing data and trends. The use of terms like 'leading the chart,' 'around twice fewer,' and 'accessed the Internet' is appropriate. To further enhance lexical resource, try incorporating more precise and varied vocabulary to describe the quantities and comparisons. For instance, instead of 'around twice fewer,' you could use 'approximately half' or 'nearly 50% less.'

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The report exhibits a good command of grammar with a variety of sentence structures. There are only a few minor errors. To achieve a higher score, ensure that all sentences are grammatically perfect and that punctuation is used accurately throughout the report. Pay close attention to subject-verb agreement, article usage, and correct tense usage.

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