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Band 4+: The chart below shows the internet users (in millions) in different countries in the Middle East as of June 2017.

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The image presents a horizontal bar chart showing values for various countries: Iran 56.7, Saudi Arabia 24.15, Iraq 14, United Arab Emirates 8.52, Yemen 6.91, Israel 6.64, Jordan 6.3, Syria 6.03, Lebanon 4.6.

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The bar graphs illustrates the amount of internet customer for overseas in the West Asia on June 2017. Overall, Iran was the largest scale of client by far in this year, cost $56.7 millions.

Looking first, the three most popular internet user on foreign land in 2017 were Iran, Saudi Arabia and Iraq with $56.7, $24.15 and $14 millions, respectively. Iran was the highest occupant which far 32.55 form the secound place, Saudi Arabia. Next was Iraq, it accounts for 1 in 4 of Iran.

Moving to the internet user in another 6 states below to United Arab Emirates, Yemen, Israel, Jordan, Syria and lebanon. United Arab Emirates has around $8.52 million which far from Iraq $5.46m. Next, 4 land where the number of users was similar which around $7m to $6m, Yemen has $6.91m away from before $1.61m. Down to Israel and Jordan which are only short distance apart $6.64m and $6.3m about $340K far. and Syria has $6.03m which was only $30K away from $6m. Lastly was below to Lebanon which the lowest users in the Middle East has only $4.6m user.

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The report covers the requirements of the task, providing a general overview of the internet users in different Middle Eastern countries. There are some inaccuracies in the data reported (e.g., using '$' instead of 'millions of users'), and the language could be more precise. To improve, focus on using accurate units and refining sentence structures for clarity.

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The report demonstrates some organization, but the flow of information is not always smooth. Transitions between ideas could be improved to enhance coherence. Paragraphing is present but could be more effectively used to group related information and create a clearer structure. For example, consider grouping countries with similar internet user numbers together in a single paragraph.

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The vocabulary used is somewhat limited and contains inaccuracies ('amount of internet customer,' 'largest scale of client,' 'cost $56.7 millions'). Expanding your vocabulary and using more precise language would improve the clarity and impact of your report. Focus on using synonyms and avoiding overly simplistic phrasing. For example, instead of 'largest scale of client,' you could say 'highest number of users.'

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The report contains several grammatical errors, including incorrect verb forms, subject-verb agreement issues, and misuse of articles and prepositions. Sentence structure is also often awkward and unclear. For example, 'Iran was the highest occupant which far 32.55 form the secound place, Saudi Arabia' is grammatically incorrect and difficult to understand. Focus on improving your understanding of basic grammar rules and sentence construction. Proofread carefully to identify and correct errors.

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