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Band 4+: The chart below shows the internet users (in millions) in different countries in the Middle East as of June 2017.

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The image presents a horizontal bar chart showing values for various countries: Iran 56.7, Saudi Arabia 24.15, Iraq 14, United Arab Emirates 8.52, Yemen 6.91, Israel 6.64, Jordan 6.3, Syria 6.03, Lebanon 4.6.

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The graph illustrates the internet users(in millions) in several countries in the Middle East as of June 2017

Overall, all of these countries( Iran, Saudi Arabia, Iraq, UAE,Yemen, Israel, Jordan,Syria,Lebonon) were using internet not enough for their population. This mean these countries’ internet users constitute approximetly 30 or 40 percent of their population in 2017.

The graph says 56.6 million people were using internet in 2017. This is the most internet usage in graph. In Saudi Arabia internet usage was second line in the graph and this usage 24.15 million people around also Iraq internet usage approximetly less 10 million than Saudi Arabia. Meanwhile UAE and Yemen internet usage 8.52 million, 6.91 million respectively. In Israel, Jordan, Syria internet users’ value was almost same,although, Israel had most user in these countries(Israel, Jordan, Syria). Respectively, internet users’ value were 6.64 million, 6.3 million, 6.03 million in 2017. The least users in Lebonan had 4.6 million users which showed in the chart.

In the conclusion, in 2017, these Middle East countries’ users approximetly 130 million,although; when its compare to world population this value is seems very low.

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The report generally addresses the task, but there are some issues with accuracy and relevance. The overall statement is not entirely accurate, and there are some inaccuracies in the data reported. The language is also a bit awkward in places. To improve, focus on accurately reporting the data and avoid making broad generalizations that are not directly supported by the graph. Also, work on improving the clarity and precision of your language.

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The report lacks a clear structure and logical flow. The overall summary is vague and not well-supported by the data. The body paragraphs jump between countries without clear transitions, making it difficult to follow the comparisons. The conclusion introduces a new comparison to the world population without proper context. To improve coherence, focus on organizing the information into logical paragraphs with clear topic sentences and transitions. Use cohesive devices to link ideas and ensure a smooth flow of information.

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The vocabulary used is basic and repetitive. There is limited use of precise language to describe the data. For example, instead of saying 'internet usage was second line in the graph,' use more descriptive phrases like 'the second highest number of internet users.' To enhance lexical resource, try to incorporate a wider range of vocabulary related to data analysis and comparison. Use synonyms and avoid repeating the same words and phrases excessively. Pay attention to vocabulary repetition to improve the overall score.

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The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses, subject-verb agreement issues, and awkward sentence structures. Punctuation is also inconsistent. For example, the sentence 'This mean these countries' internet users constitute approximetly 30 or 40 percent of their population in 2017' contains several errors. To improve grammatical accuracy, carefully proofread your work and focus on using correct grammar and sentence structure. Consider using a grammar checker to identify and correct errors.

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