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Band 6+: The chart below shows the number of immigrants to Germany by region in 2010 and 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

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The image is a bar chart comparing data in millions for the years 2000 and 2010 across six regions. For 2000, the values are: Oceania 16, Europe 30, Africa 6, America 23, East Asia 15, and South Asia 6. For 2010, the values are: Oceania 23, Europe 25, Africa 7.5, America 12.5, East Asia 24, and South Asia 5.5.

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Given diagram represents the count of people who travel to Germany during the period of 2000 and 2010.

Overall, most of the people from Europe migrated to germany in 2000 and 2010, while the people from South asia and Africa are least in numbers who left for the Germany in these two years.

Oceania showing that people above from 15 million and more than 20 million moved to Germany in 2000 and 2010 respectively.Bars for the Europe section were highest in both years in comparision to remaining countries.

Africa and South Asia were smallest in number of migrants , above from 5 million people travelled to Germany from Africa and almost 5 million people from South Asia left their country in 2000 and 2010.

In 2000 America was the country which ranked on 2nd position in terms of people who went germany and in 2010 it again dropped down.East Asia was intially lesser in number and then havd dramatic increase in 2010 in terms of numbers who left for the Germany as an immigrants.

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people: 7

germany: 7

million: 4

south: 3

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Task Response

The report covers the main features of the bar chart and makes relevant comparisons. There are some minor inaccuracies in the data reported (e.g., the years are 2000 and 2010, not 2010 and 2020 as stated in the task). To improve, ensure data accuracy and vary sentence structure for a more sophisticated response.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report presents a general overview and identifies some key trends, but the organization could be improved for better flow. Consider grouping information more thematically, such as discussing regions with increasing immigration versus those with decreasing immigration. Transitions between paragraphs could also be smoother to enhance coherence.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is generally adequate for the task, but there's room for improvement in terms of precision and variety. For instance, instead of repeatedly using phrases like 'people from,' try rephrasing using more specific terms related to immigration or origin. Explore synonyms for words like 'number,' 'increase,' and 'decrease' to add sophistication to your writing.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains grammatical errors and phrasing issues that affect clarity. Focus on improving sentence structure and ensuring correct subject-verb agreement. Pay close attention to the use of prepositions and articles. Review and correct errors related to tense consistency and word choice to enhance grammatical accuracy.

Band 6+: The chart below shows the number of immigrants to Germany by region in 2010 and 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

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