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Band 7+: The chart below shows the number of insurance policies issued by insurance companies in Nepal from 2015 to 2019. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image shows a bar graph depicting the number of policies issued by insurance companies from 2015 to 2019 with specific numerical values for Life Insurance and Non-Life Insurance: 2015 - Life: 1,200,000, Non-Life: 1,000,000; 2016 - Life: 1,400,000, Non-Life: 1,200,000; 2017 - Life: 1,700,000, Non-Life: 1,800,000; 2018 - Life: 1,800,000, Non-Life: 1,900,000; 2019 - Life: 1,900,000, Non-Life: 2,000,000.

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The given bar graph compares the number of insurance policies issued by insurance companies in terms of life and non-life insurance between 2015 and 2019 in Nepal.

Overall, there is a noticeable increase in the number of policies over the years. Moreover, life insurance had the highest figure while non-life was the lowest.

Looking first at 2015, the number of policies issued by life insurance was 1,200,000, and it registered 1,080,000 in terms of non-life insurance. In 2016, the life insurance figure increased to 1,330,000 policies, while the non-life figure rose to 1,400,000, then it maintained an increase until it reached 1,700,000 policies in 2016. Meanwhile, life insurance stood at 1,750,000.

Turning to the next year, life insurance returned to be the highest figure with 1,820,000 policies above the other category. Furthermore, in 2019, the life insurance detail peaked at 1,950,000 policies, while the non-life insurance reached 1,900,000.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

insurance: 11

policies: 7

non-life: 5

figure: 4

number: 3

while: 3

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Task Response

The report addresses the task by describing the general upward trend and making some comparisons between life and non-life insurance. However, there are several inaccuracies in the data (e.g., non-life in 2015, life in 2016, and the figures for 2017-2019), and some descriptions are unclear or inconsistent (e.g., 'reached 1,700,000 policies in 2016' for non-life, and 'life insurance returned to be the highest figure' without clear context). To improve, ensure all figures are accurately reported and clearly linked to the correct years and categories. Additionally, provide a more coherent and complete overview of the main trends, such as noting that non-life overtook life in 2017 and remained higher thereafter. Avoid vague statements and ensure each year is covered logically. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is generally well-organized with a clear overall trend and a logical progression through the years. However, there are some minor lapses in coherence, such as the phrase 'then it maintained an increase until it reached 1,700,000 policies in 2016' which seems to refer to a different year than intended, and the transition 'Turning to the next year' could be smoother. The paragraphing is adequate, but the flow could be improved by more precise referencing and clearer connections between data points.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is appropriate for the task, with terms like 'noticeable increase', 'registered', 'maintained an increase', and 'peaked' showing good range. However, there is some repetition and a few awkward phrasings, such as 'life insurance returned to be the highest figure' and 'the life insurance detail peaked'. More varied and precise vocabulary could enhance the report, for example, using 'surpassed', 'outnumbered', or 'reached a peak'. Pay attention to vocabulary repetition to improve the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report demonstrates a good range of grammatical structures with accurate use of tenses and comparatives. There are virtually no grammar errors, and punctuation is correct. The main issue is a slight lack of complexity in sentence structures, as most sentences are simple or compound. Incorporating more complex structures, such as subordinate clauses, would add variety and sophistication.

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