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Band 4+: The chart below shows the number of international applicants to the universities of one European country. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image shows the number of international applicants to the universities of one European country from 2004 to 2008 by country; in 2004: China 27,000, Japan 10,000, USA 10,000, Russia 2,000; in 2005: China 24,000, Japan 12,000, USA 10,000, Russia 3,000; in 2006: China 22,000, Japan 17,000, USA 15,000, Russia 4,000; in 2007: China 20,000, Japan 18,000, USA 16,000, Russia 6,000; in 2008: China 28,000, Japan 17,000, USA 12,000, Russia 7,000.

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The bar chart below illustrates how many numbers of applicants to the international universities have been send only by European country, period between 2004,2005,2006,2007 and 2008.

Overall,numbers of foreign universities to where was send applications seperated into 4, China,Japan,USA and Russia.Consistently, the european at the begining of a period given were interested in China rather in any other countries.

In 2004, the highest position got China besides USA with approximeditely upper 25.ooo applications.Whereas in 2008 , USA rise to the second position though the given time with slightly the same number as China.Back to the begining, Japans propotions stayes the same with a small changes.It only increases for 3.000 between,which contributes Japan rise up to 10.000 by the 2008.

By the 2006 and 2007 countries didnt expirienced much increase or decrease exept USA. This figure surged slighly from under 20.000 to upper this number.In addition,Russia have stayed the same from the given period of time.Meanwhile, the percentage of China get to their down.

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