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Band 4+: The chart below shows the number of people participating in different recreational activities at a community center in Sydney, Australia, over the period from 2019 to 2023. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

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The image displays participant numbers for four activities from 2019 to 2023: Dance Classes start at 50, dip slightly to 45, rise to about 55 in 2021, and continue upwards to 70; Yoga Classes begin at 45, increase to 50 in 2020, maintain this till 2021, ascend to 55 in 2022 followed by slight growth to 60; Art Workshops' attendees number begins at approximately 35, slightly increase to roughly 37 in 2020, 40 in 2021, climb to 42 in 2022, and peak at near 45 in 2023; Chess Club starts at 20, gradually rises to around 22 in 2020, increases to around 25 in 2021, ascends to about 28 in 2022, and ultimately approaches 30 by 2023.

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Theres a couple of recreational activites that was dated from 2019 to 2023, which consist 4 activites; Dance classes, Yoga classes, Art workshops, and Chess clubs.

The lowest number of participants is hold by the chess clubs. In 2019, it started around below 20, each year till 2023 it emerges around maximum 40 participants.

While in Art workshops started at 20 participants and gradully increased till about 40 participants.

Yoga classes on the other hand, started around 30 participants. Merging quite well until 60 participants in 2023.

Dance classes started the most among them, it consist around 50 participants. Each year, the participants kept on either decreasing and increasing. In 2020, the participants was below 50 and increased until 60 at 2021. It decreased in 2022, and emerged till 70 participants in 2023

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