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Band 5+: The chart below shows the number of people working in 4 sports sectors in an Australian town in 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image displays a bar chart detailing the number of people working in four sports sectors as volunteers or in paid roles in an Australian town in 2015; Coaches have approximately 60 volunteers and 50 paid workers, Referees have about 40 volunteers and 30 paid workers, Managers around 20 volunteers and 40 paid, and Other sectors around 30 volunteers and 60 paid.

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The chart gives information about the number of people working in 4 sports sectors in an Australian town in 2015 . It is clearly that the number of people who working as a coaches is the highest and most volunteer choose to work as a coaches

We can see that the number of volunteer who work as a coaches is the highest among 4 sport sector,at more than 70 while the volunteer who work as a referees is lowest,at 30. The number of volunteer who work at other sectors are higher than that of managers ,at 55 and 45 respectively

On the other hand the number of people who get paid to work as a coaches or at other sectors are the same,at approximately 45. Furthermore the number of people who earned money to work as a referees is similar to that of manager,at 35.

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number: 6

people: 4

volunteer: 4

sectors: 3

coaches: 3

other: 3

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The main features of the chart are presented, but some details are inaccurate and the comparisons are not always clearly expressed. More precise numerical data would improve the response. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report's message is mostly understandable, but the numerous grammatical errors and inconsistent paragraphing affect the overall flow and cohesion. Improving grammatical accuracy would significantly enhance readability.

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5.5

The vocabulary used is adequate, but a wider range of more precise and sophisticated vocabulary would improve the quality of the report. More precise language to describe the data would be beneficial.

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The report contains numerous grammatical errors that significantly impact clarity and accuracy. A substantial improvement in grammatical accuracy is needed to achieve a higher score.

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