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Band 6+: The chart below shows the percentage of Australian people who were born in different places of the world.

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The image displays a line graph depicting percentage of Australian residents born abroad across five years: in 1976, the percentages were Total 25, UK 14, Other 8, Asia 1; in 1981 Total 23, UK 12, Other 9, Asia 2; in 1986 Total 22, UK 10, Other 10, Asia 3; in 1991 Total 22, UK 9, Other 11, Asia 4; in 1996 Total 23, UK 8, Other 12, Asia 5; in 2001 Total 25, UK 8, Other 12, Asia 6; in 2006 Total 26, UK 7, Other 13, Asia 8; in 2011 Total 27, UK 6, Other 14, Asia 10.

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The line graph illustrates data about the percentage of people who are being Australian but were born in different parts of the world from 1976 to 2011.

Overall, the total number of Australians in this period of time was slightly decreased. However then start to increase in the last part of the time.

There were a significant increase in Asia which was keep going to the 15 percentage of Australian in 2011. In contrast, in UK this number dramatically dropped from about 15 percentage to only 5 percentage of the total proportion. In other places in the world in 1976 this percentages of Australians decreased until 1996 and then started to rose slightly to 2011. In total proportion of Australian people around the world dramatically dropped from about 30 percentage to over 20 percentage in 1986. After that the number climbed considerably from 1991 to 2011.

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Task Response

The report addresses the task, but there are some inaccuracies and a lack of clarity. The description of trends is somewhat general and could benefit from more specific data points. The language used contains some errors that affect clarity. To improve, focus on providing more precise data references and ensure grammatical accuracy. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

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The report demonstrates an adequate attempt to organize the information, but the flow could be improved. The introduction provides a general overview, and the body paragraphs attempt to group information. However, the transitions between sentences and ideas are not always smooth, making it slightly difficult to follow the trends and comparisons. Consider using more cohesive devices to link ideas and improve the overall flow.

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The report uses a reasonable range of vocabulary, but there are instances where more precise word choices could enhance the description. For example, using synonyms for 'increase' and 'decrease' could add variety. While the vocabulary is generally appropriate, there's room to elevate the language to a more sophisticated level.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors that affect clarity. Verb tense inconsistencies ('are being Australian' instead of 'were Australian'), incorrect word usage ('rose' instead of 'rise'), and awkward phrasing ('keep going to the 15 percentage') are present. While the overall meaning is understandable, these errors detract from the report's accuracy. Focus on improving sentence structure, verb tense consistency, and correct word usage to enhance grammatical accuracy.

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