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Band 4+: The chart below shows the percentage of fuel from renewable energy used in the transport sector in six European Union (EU) countries in 2009 and 2010, compared to the average. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image presents data on the percentage of fuel from renewable energy used in the transport sector for the years 2009 and 2010 across seven categories: Slovakia 2009 at 9%, 2010 at 8%; Austria 2009 at 6%, 2010 at 7%; France 2009 at 6%, 2010 at 7%; Poland 2009 at 5%, 2010 at 6%; Spain 2009 at 4%, 2010 at 6%; Greece 2009 at 1%, 2010 at 2%; EU average 2009 at 4%, 2010 at 5%.

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The bar chart reveals information about the percentage of the fuel from renowable energy used in six different transport sectors in 2009 and 2010.

Overall, as can be seen from the chart the the highes percentages were seen in the Slovakia, while these percentages were the lowest in the Greece sector in both years.

Slovakia was the the most used fuel with aproximately 10% in 2009. However, after a year later it fell down to 8 %, but still it remained the most used sector. Additionally, there were Australia sector which is decreased from 6% to 5% as the same as Solvakia. But only France sector with 6% remain unchanged in both years.

Nevertheless the percentage of using fuel in Pland were 5%, Spain higher than 3%, greece 1% and UE avrage were 4% in 2009. But in 2010 all these sectors saw increase with only 1 % as well as Eu avrage.

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