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Band 6+: The chart below shows the percentage of male and female teachers in six different types of educational setting in the UK in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image shows male and female teacher percentages in the UK 2010: Nursery/Pre-school, Men 2%, Women 98%; Primary school, Men 8%, Women 92%; Secondary school, Men 48%, Women 52%; College, Men 44%, Women 56%; Private training institute, Men 54%, Women 46%; University, Men 70%, Women 30%.

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The bar chart compares the proportion of teachers in six various educational aspects by gender in the UK in 2010. It is clear that women were dominant in all school settings, from pre to secondary school, while men were more likely to work in high educational settings. It is also noticeable that, proportion of female teachers is by far the highest in pre-school.

According to bar chart, the percentage of female tutors in pre-school was about 95%, with only 5 % for male tutors. Similarly, the share of women teachers was by far more in primary school ( 90 versus 10 ). The women teachers outweigh the numbers in Secondary school, but by less difference, about 10% margin.

On the other hand, the percentage of male tutors was the highest in universities. There were about 70% men and 30% women. Similarly, men were more likely to work more in private institutes, about 55%. Eventually, there was an educational setting with equal proportion of gender: college consisting equally half men and women. give me word count

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women: 5

teachers: 4

school: 4

about: 4

proportion: 3

educational: 3

tutors: 3

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Task Response

The report addresses the task well, providing a clear overview and highlighting key trends in the data. The organization is logical, and the main features of the chart are presented. However, there are some inaccuracies in the data reported (e.g., '95%' instead of '98%' for female teachers in pre-school, '90 versus 10' instead of '92 versus 8' for primary school). While the overall trends are correctly identified, greater accuracy in reporting the data would improve the response. Also, the report could benefit from more specific comparisons and details to fully develop the analysis.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is generally coherent, but the organization could be improved. Consider grouping similar trends together more explicitly. For example, discuss the settings where women dominate first, then transition to those where men are more prevalent. The phrase 'various educational aspects' is vague; using 'types of educational settings' would be more precise. Also, avoid abrupt transitions between paragraphs; use linking words or phrases to connect ideas smoothly.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate but could be more varied and precise. For instance, instead of repeatedly using 'percentage,' try 'proportion' or 'share.' The phrase 'dominant in all school settings, from pre to secondary school' is a bit awkward; rephrasing to 'predominant in pre-school, primary, and secondary schools' would be clearer. Also, 'high educational settings' is vague; specify 'higher education settings' or 'universities and private training institutes.'

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains grammatical errors that affect clarity. For example, 'proportion of female teachers is by far the highest in pre-school' should be 'the proportion of female teachers is by far the highest in pre-school.' Also, '90 versus 10' is informal; use '90% compared to 10%.' The sentence 'college consisting equally half men and women' is grammatically incorrect; it should be 'colleges, consisting of roughly equal proportions of men and women.' Pay attention to subject-verb agreement and correct use of prepositions.

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