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Band 4+: The chart below shows the percentage of youth population in 1985 and 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

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The image shows youth population percentages aged 14 years and below for 1985 and 2008: Italy 1985 (20%), Italy 2008 (14%), Euro Area 1985 (22%), Euro Area 2008 (15%), United Kingdom 1985 (21%), United Kingdom 2008 (18%), United States 1985 (22%), United States 2008 (21%), China 1985 (29%), China 2008 (20%), Brazil 1985 (36%), Brazil 2008 (29%), India 1985 (38%), India 2008 (32%).

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The bar chart illustrates the proportion of youth population between 1985 and 2008. In general, India and Brazil rose sharply. However, Italy and Euro Area decrised slowly.

In 1985, Italiya was half as many percent as Brazil with 18 and 36 percent respectively. The second destination was both of Euro Area and United Kingdom at 19% too. The third destination was United States at around 21%. subesquently,the fourth destination was China at just over 30. After that, the next place was Brazil at approximately 36%. After,The final destination was India at just under 40 percent.

In 2008, Italiya was at nearly 18% and Euro Area was at roughly 15 percent. Next, United states was at just under 20%. Then, United store and China were at 20 percent. Subesquently, Brazil was not as popular as India because Brazil was at just over 35% , India was at just under 40 percent.

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The vocabulary used is basic and lacks precision. There is over-reliance on simple words and phrases, and limited use of more sophisticated language to describe trends and comparisons. To improve, try to incorporate a wider range of vocabulary related to data analysis and demographic trends. For example, instead of 'rose sharply' or 'decrised slowly,' use more specific terms like 'increased significantly' or 'declined gradually.'

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The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses, subject-verb agreement issues, and misuse of prepositions. Sentence structure is often awkward and unclear, making it difficult to understand the intended meaning. Focus on improving your understanding of basic grammar rules and sentence construction. Proofread carefully to identify and correct errors before submitting your work.

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