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Band 4+: The chart below shows the percentages of men and women employed in executive positions in ACME Oil Company in 1995.

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The image presents a bar chart displaying the percentages of men and women in executive positions at ACME Oil Company in 1995, featuring five categories labeled A through E. Men dominate in Category A and B with 90% and 80% respectively, while women hold 10% and 20%. In Category C, men and women are equal at 50%. Women surpass men in Category D and E with 60% and 70% to men's 40% and 30%.

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The bar Chart compares the portion of man and women employment in different categories in Acme Oil Company from 1995

Overall, It is clear that the highest number of men employed in category A Where women in E.By contrast, the number of men who executive in the A category was lowest as well as women lowest in E.

In category A, almost 90 percentage of men employment . Then in category B, the second highest number of men which is about 75 percentage. After that, in category C approximately 17 proportion. of men in executive which decreased day be day.

On the other hand,women employment increased. In category A, thay only 9 percent. then in in category B it’s almost 22portion.Next in category D,it rose up to approximately 55 percentage. After that the highest number was in category E. Its above 80 percent women employment was in this chart over the year.

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category: 9

women: 4

employment: 4

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percentage: 3

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The report is somewhat difficult to follow due to grammatical errors, unclear sentence structure, and lack of cohesive devices. The student attempts to organize the report, but the paragraphs are not well-connected.

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The student uses some basic vocabulary, but there is a lack of precision and accuracy. The language is not sophisticated, and there are some errors in word choice.

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The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including subject-verb agreement errors, incorrect verb tenses, and sentence structure issues. The student struggles to express themselves accurately and clearly.

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The chart below shows the percentages of men and women employed in executive positions in ACME Oil Company in 1995.

The chart below shows the percentages of men and women employed in executive positions in ACME Oil Company in 1995.

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