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Band 5+: The chart shows British Emigration to selected destinations between 2004 and 2007. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make compariesons where relevant.

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The image shows British emigration to selected destinations from 2004 to 2007: in 2004, Australia 41K, Spain 33K, New Zealand 22K, USA 24K, France 22K; in 2005, Australia 39K, Spain 35K, New Zealand 21K, USA 19K, France 19K; in 2006, Australia 51K, Spain 32K, New Zealand 21K, USA 18K, France 27K; in 2007, Australia 43K, Spain 28K, New Zealand 20K, USA 20K, France 18K.

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The bar chart illustrates the total of UK’s citizens who moving abroad to Australia, Spain, New Zealand, the USA, and France. The cart counted in thousands from 2004 until 2007.

Overall, Australia was the first nation that British choose as their country to emigration from compared years. Spain as the second country and New Zealand, the USA, and France as the last nations that UK’s people choose to moved.

In 2004 until 2007, even though Australia was the highest nation choosen to living abroad approximately almost 40,000 people in 2005, more than 40,000 citizens in 2005 until 2007, peaked above 50,000 individuals in 2006 and declined in 2007. Australia, the USA, and France had fluctuative trend. The USA and France remarked had the lowest, orderly below 20,000 in 2005 and 2007.

On the other hand, Spain and New Zealand had fallen trend from compared time to time. Although there was a slight incline trend from 2004 to 2005 for Spain, however both Spain and New Zealand constantly drop the total of citizens moved abroad and reached its lowest point in 2007 about 27,000 people for Spain and 20,000 for New Zealand.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

spain: 6

zealand: 5

australia: 4

france: 4

citizens: 3

abroad: 3

until: 3

people: 3

trend: 3

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Task Response

The report addresses the task by describing the main trends and making some comparisons. However, there are several inaccuracies and unclear statements. For instance, the report states that Australia was the highest in 2005 with 'almost 40,000' but the data shows 39,000, which is close, but then says 'more than 40,000 citizens in 2005 until 2007' which is incorrect for 2005 and 2007. Also, the description of trends for the USA and France is vague and not fully accurate. The report could be improved by providing clearer, more accurate data for each country and year, and by making more precise comparisons. Additionally, there are grammatical errors and awkward phrasing that affect clarity. Focus on accurate data reporting and clearer expression.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a clear overall structure with an introduction, an overview, and body paragraphs, but the flow is often disrupted by awkward phrasing and unclear references. The overview is somewhat vague and does not clearly highlight the most significant trends. The body paragraphs attempt to group data, but the organization within them is confusing, and the use of cohesive devices is limited and sometimes inaccurate. To improve, ensure each paragraph has a clear central idea, use a range of linking words and phrases accurately, and make sure the progression of ideas is logical and easy to follow.

Lexical Resource

The report uses some appropriate vocabulary related to trends (e.g., 'peaked', 'declined', 'fluctuative', 'fallen trend'), but there are frequent errors in word choice and collocation (e.g., 'the total of UK's citizens who moving abroad', 'the first nation that British choose', 'the last nations that UK's people choose to moved'). The range of vocabulary is limited, and there is repetition of certain phrases. To improve, expand your vocabulary for describing data and trends, and practice using words in the correct context. Pay attention to precise terms like 'emigration', 'destination', 'fluctuated', and 'declined'. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors that significantly affect clarity and accuracy. There are issues with subject-verb agreement (e.g., 'the total of UK's citizens who moving abroad'), incorrect verb forms (e.g., 'choose to moved'), and inconsistent tense usage. Punctuation is also problematic, with missing commas and run-on sentences. The range of grammatical structures is limited, and the errors often make the meaning unclear. To improve, focus on basic sentence structure, verb tense consistency, and subject-verb agreement. Review the use of articles and prepositions, and practice writing clearer, more controlled sentences.

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