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Band 6+: The chart shows British Emigration to selected destinations between 2004 and 2007. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make compariesons where relevant.

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The image shows British emigration to selected destinations from 2004 to 2007: in 2004, Australia 41K, Spain 33K, New Zealand 22K, USA 24K, France 22K; in 2005, Australia 39K, Spain 35K, New Zealand 21K, USA 19K, France 19K; in 2006, Australia 51K, Spain 32K, New Zealand 21K, USA 18K, France 27K; in 2007, Australia 43K, Spain 28K, New Zealand 20K, USA 20K, France 18K.

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The bar chart illustrates the number of British people who emigrated to five countries: Australia, Spain, New Zealand, USA and France from 2004 to 2007.

Overall, Australia was the most preferred by British people. Whereas, remaining destinations show downward trends and minor fluctuations, except France displaying a most noticeable change.

As is shown in the chart, the number of British emigrants who selected Australia were the highest between 2004 and 2007 and had the highest record in 2006 which was over 50,000 people. In terms of Spain, the number of British who were allocated to Spain declined slightly from 35,000 to 29,000.

Turning to the remaining countries, New Zealand and the USA were the two least preferred destinations. The figure for New Zealand decreased steadily while the USA’s figure fluctuated slightly. In addition, France reached a peak in 2005 which was over 30,000 and meanwhile dropped significantly to under 20,000.

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Overall Band Score

6.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

british: 4

number: 3

people: 3

australia: 3

spain: 3

zealand: 3

france: 3

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Task Response

The report covers the main requirements of the task and provides a clear overview of the trends. You have successfully identified the most popular destination and noted the general downward trends. To improve, ensure that all data points mentioned are consistent with the visual information provided (for example, the peak for France and the specific figures for Spain). Additionally, try to refine the grouping of information to make comparisons between the countries more seamless rather than listing them individually.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is organized into logical paragraphs, and the progression of ideas is generally clear. However, there are issues with sentence connectivity. For instance, starting a sentence with 'Whereas' in the overview creates a fragment rather than a cohesive complex sentence. To improve, ensure that subordinating conjunctions are used to link clauses within a single sentence rather than starting new ones, which will help the flow of information.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is appropriate for the task, with terms like 'emigrated', 'downward trends', and 'fluctuated' used correctly. However, some word choices are slightly unnatural in this context; for example, 'allocated to Spain' is typically used for resources or tasks rather than people moving to a country. Using 'migrated to' or 'moved to' would be more precise. Aim for more sophisticated collocations to reach higher bands.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report demonstrates a mix of simple and complex structures, but there are several grammatical inaccuracies. There is a subject-verb agreement error in the phrase 'the number... were the highest' (it should be 'was'). Additionally, the punctuation and sentence structure in the overview paragraph hinder the grammatical accuracy. Focus on mastering subject-verb agreement and the correct use of relative clauses to ensure smoother and more accurate sentence construction.

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