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Band 5+: The charts below demonstrate monthly revenues(in millions of pounds) of three famous hotels in the United Kingdom and the distribution of guests in those hotels. Summarize the key trends by selecting and reporting the most significant features, and make comparisons where relevant

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The image shows a line graph and three pie charts with data spanning from 2000 to 2016. Line graph: Grand Palace Hotel figures from 2000 to 2016 are as follows - 2000: 30, 2002: 27, 2004: 28, 2006: 40, 2008: 35, 2010: 37, 2012: 39, 2014: 38, 2016: 40; Riverside Inn figures are 2000: 10, 2002: 14, 2004: 10, 2006: 20, 2008: 30, 2010: 22, 2012: 25, 2014: 27, 2016: 30; Skyline Resort figures are 2000: 25, 2002: 30, 2004: 35, 2006: 32, 2008: 23, 2010: 21, 2012: 28, 2014: 29, 2016: 20. Pie charts display percentage distribution for each hotel: Grand Palace Hotel - International: 60%, Domestic: 28%, Unknown: 12%; Riverside Inn - International: 15%, Domestic: 46%, Unknown: 39%; Skyline Resort - International: 57%, Domestic: 43%.

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The chart illustrates outcome (is presented in millions of pounds) of three prominent hotels per month in the UK and the where are the guests from In those hotels.

Overall, international visitors influence significantly to hotel’s revenue.The figure for the Grand Palace Hotel, which has many international guests, was the highest in most periods. While that for the Riverside Inn, where dominate domestic guests, was noticeable lower. Moreover, the Skyline Resort’s income decreased in the end of period.

The initial numbers for the Grand Palace Hotel and Riverside Inn were 25 and 12, respectively, while that for the Skyline Resort was a just above 20. The figure for Grand Palace Hotel and Skyline Resort reached its summit in 2008 at around 40 and 31, accordingly. However, the figure for Skyline Resort diminished by 10 in the 2016, whereas that for other two hotels increased from their original value.

The Grand Palace Hotel and Skyline Resort often experienced with foreign guests account for approximately 60%, while only 39% showed in the Riverside Inn. Furthermore, the proportion of residents of the country (local) ranged between 28% and 46%.

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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

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skyline: 5

guests: 4

grand: 4

palace: 4

hotel: 4

resort: 4

figure: 3

while: 3

riverside: 3

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Task Response

The report addresses the main requirements of the task by identifying key trends and making comparisons between the hotels. An overview is provided, which is essential for a good score. However, there are some inaccuracies in data reporting (for example, stating the Grand Palace Hotel started at 25 when the data suggests 30) and some confusion in the description of the guest distribution. To improve, ensure that the data points cited are strictly accurate to the visual information provided and work on the clarity of your comparisons. Some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing occasionally obscure the meaning, though the overall message remains understandable.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report follows a logical structure with an introduction, overview, and body paragraphs. However, the progression of ideas is sometimes hindered by awkward phrasing and grammatical errors. For instance, the transition between describing revenue trends and guest distribution could be smoother. To improve, focus on using more cohesive devices (e.g., 'In terms of guest distribution,' or 'Regarding the revenue trends') to signal shifts in topic clearly. Ensure that each paragraph has a clear central topic.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is somewhat limited and often used incorrectly, which impacts clarity. For example, 'outcome' is not the appropriate term for 'revenue,' and 'dominate domestic guests' is ungrammatical. There are also issues with word choice such as 'showed in' instead of 'accounted for.' To improve, work on learning collocations related to data description (e.g., 'revenue generated,' 'accounted for a proportion of,' 'reached a peak') and ensure that the words chosen fit the academic context of the task.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Grammatical errors are frequent and occasionally impede communication. There are issues with subject-verb agreement, article usage (e.g., 'in the 2016'), and sentence structure (e.g., 'the where are the guests from'). Some sentences are fragmented or overly complex in a way that obscures meaning. To improve, practice constructing complex sentences using relative clauses correctly and focus on mastering basic tense consistency and prepositional accuracy. Reviewing sentence patterns for describing trends will help increase accuracy.

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