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The image displays two sections: one bar chart and one table. The bar chart shows the life expectancy in four countries with Japan at 82.7, Korea at 79.2, U.S. at 77.2, and Indonesia at 70.9. The table exhibits the increase in life expectancy in years for each country where Japan increased by 5.1 years, Korea by 9.3 years, U.S. by 3.2 years, and Indonesia by 14.1 years.

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The bar chart compares average lifespan in four different countries and the accompanying table illustrates the rise in average life duration. Overall, people live in Japan who have the highest life span, however another Asian country which is Indonesia has the lowest longevity. The U.S has the lowest growing life span, while Indonesia takes first place in this situation.

Focusing first on the Indonesians’ the longevity is poor that 82.7, meanwhile the Japaneses’ life span is best which is 70.9. The other nations such as Koreans and Americans has average longevity in a bar chart that 79.2 and 77.2 in order.

Although, Indonesia has a poor lifespan, the population’s life expectancy increased and reach to 14.1. In this situation the U.S population shows the lowest result which is 3.2. Although,Japanes has longest lifespan, they demonstrate the second lowest result in a table such as 5.1. The Korea always keep its stability and shows average increase in life expectancy like 9.3.

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The report addresses the task, but there are some inaccuracies and a tendency to repeat information. The organization is present but could be improved for clarity. To improve, focus on providing more precise data and avoid generalizations. Also, ensure that the structure of your report is clear and logical, with distinct paragraphs for different aspects of the data.

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The report demonstrates some organization, but the flow of ideas is not always logical, and the connections between sentences and paragraphs could be clearer. The introduction and overview are present but lack precision. The use of cohesive devices is limited, leading to abrupt transitions between ideas. Paragraphing is attempted but not always effective in grouping related information. To improve, focus on using a wider range of cohesive devices (e.g., conjunctions, pronouns, synonyms) to link ideas smoothly. Ensure each paragraph has a clear topic and that sentences within a paragraph relate to that topic. A clearer overview summarizing the main trends would also enhance coherence.

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The report uses a limited range of vocabulary, and there are instances of inaccuracy and inappropriateness. Word choice is sometimes basic and lacks precision. There is some attempt to use relevant vocabulary related to life expectancy, but this could be expanded and used more effectively. To improve, focus on expanding your vocabulary related to describing trends, comparisons, and data. Use a thesaurus to find synonyms and avoid repetition. Pay attention to the specific context and choose words that accurately convey the intended meaning.

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The report exhibits a limited range of grammatical structures, and there are frequent errors in grammar and punctuation. Sentence structures are often simple and repetitive. Errors in verb tense, subject-verb agreement, and article usage are noticeable. Punctuation is inconsistent and sometimes incorrect. To improve, focus on using a wider variety of sentence structures (e.g., complex sentences, passive voice) to express ideas more effectively. Review basic grammar rules and pay close attention to verb tenses, subject-verb agreement, and article usage. Proofread carefully for punctuation errors.

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