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Band 5+: The charts below provide information about the websites where consumers from Australia and New Zealand bought products in 2012, as well as their reasons for online shopping.

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The image includes two pie charts and one table comparing online shopping in Australia and New Zealand. In the Australia pie chart: Local websites - 20%, International websites - 8%, Both local and international websites - 72%. In the New Zealand pie chart: Local websites - 25%, International websites - 10%, Both local and international websites - 65%. The table below lists reasons for online shopping with percentages for Australia and New Zealand respectively: Lower price than physical stores - 53%, 57%; Convenience - 24%, 22%; Quality of products - 18%, 16%; Other reasons - 5%, 5%.

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The pie chart illustrates the percentage local and international consumers from Australia nad New Zealand, while the table show the reason of online shopping in 2012.

Overall in both Australia and New zealand local and international websites combined were dominant in online shopping platforms, while the most popular reason for online shopping is the lower price than in physical shop.

Focusing on the highest figures at pie chart, first both local and international websites were the highst figure in Australia with making up 72% and with 65% in New Zealand, after which local websites making up 20% in Australia and with 25% in New Zealand, The lowest figures in pie chart its International websites with 8% in australia and with 10% in New Zealand. Focusing on the highest figures at the table the main reason for shopping online were lower price than in physical stores with 53% in Australia and 57% in New Zealand, The second reason was convenience of the consumers with 24% in Australia and 22% in New Zealand, The third reason was the quality of products with 18% in Australia and 16% in New Zealand, and the last one were others reason with the lowest percentage of number with 5% in both countries

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australia: 8

zealand: 8

reason: 6

local: 4

international: 4

online: 4

shopping: 4

websites: 4

chart: 3

figures: 3

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Task Response

The report adequately addresses the task by presenting the main features of the charts and table, and making relevant comparisons between Australia and New Zealand. The overall trend is clearly identified, and key data points are included. However, there are some minor omissions and lapses in accuracy and clarity. For instance, the introduction could be more precise in describing the visual information, and there are a few grammatical errors and awkward phrasings (e.g., 'the reason of online shopping', 'Focusing on the highest figures at pie chart'). To improve, ensure the overview is more comprehensive and the language is more polished. Additionally, consider structuring the report more clearly by separating the description of the pie charts and the table into distinct paragraphs.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a logical structure with an introduction, overview, and body paragraphs, but the flow is disrupted by frequent errors and awkward phrasing. The use of cohesive devices is limited and sometimes inaccurate (e.g., 'Focusing on the highest figures at pie chart, first...'). Paragraphing is not effectively managed, as the body paragraphs are not clearly separated and the information is presented in a run-on manner. To improve, use clear topic sentences, vary linking words, and ensure each paragraph focuses on a distinct aspect (e.g., one for the pie charts, one for the table).

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate for the task, with some attempts at paraphrasing (e.g., 'dominant in online shopping platforms'), but there are frequent errors in word choice and collocation (e.g., 'the reason of online shopping', 'the highst figure', 'others reason'). The range of vocabulary is limited, and there is repetition of phrases like 'Focusing on the highest figures'. To improve, use a wider range of precise terms (e.g., 'accounted for', 'constituted', 'the most significant factor') and ensure correct word forms and collocations.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors that affect clarity, including subject-verb agreement ('the table show'), incorrect prepositions ('the reason of'), and missing articles ('the percentage local and international consumers'). There are also spelling errors ('nad', 'highst', 'australia') and punctuation issues (missing commas, run-on sentences). The range of grammatical structures is limited, with most sentences being simple or compound. To improve, focus on sentence structure variety, proofread for common errors, and ensure correct use of articles, prepositions, and verb forms.

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