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Band 6+: The charts below provide information about the websites where consumers from Australia and New Zealand bought products in 2012, as well as their reasons for online shopping.

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The image includes two pie charts and one table comparing online shopping in Australia and New Zealand. In the Australia pie chart: Local websites - 20%, International websites - 8%, Both local and international websites - 72%. In the New Zealand pie chart: Local websites - 25%, International websites - 10%, Both local and international websites - 65%. The table below lists reasons for online shopping with percentages for Australia and New Zealand respectively: Lower price than physical stores - 53%, 57%; Convenience - 24%, 22%; Quality of products - 18%, 16%; Other reasons - 5%, 5%.

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Overall, the distribution among surveyed was relatively similar, showing a clear majority of customers shopping on overseas websites only compared to the lowest proportion of those who use both overseas and local websites.The provided table illustrated the lower prices as the main reason for online shopping, and other reasons had the lowest percentage.

In terms of pie charts, the percentages of customers shopping on only overseas websites were the highest in both Australia and New Zealand in 2012, accounting for 65 and 50 percent, respectively. Usage of only local websites ranked second in both countries. The proportion of customers shopping on local websites composed one quarter in Australia, while that of New Zealand comprised approximately twice as high as that of Australia, at 43 percent. The lowest proportions were recorded for both overseas and local websites in both Australia and New Zealand, comprising 10 and 7 percent, respectively.

As for the main reasons for online shopping, lower prices than in store was the most popular reason in both Australia and New Zealand in 2012, at 55 and 51 percent, respectively. Convenience came second, comprising 28 percent in Australia and 36 percent in New Zealand. The percentage of customers who chose online shopping because of better range of products accounted for 15 percent in Australia, whereas that of New Zealand composed 11 percent. Other reasons ranked last, composing only 2 percent in both countries.

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percent: 9

australia: 7

shopping: 6

zealand: 6

websites: 5

customers: 4

overseas: 4

local: 4

lowest: 3

online: 3

reasons: 3

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Task Response

The report attempts to address the task by describing the pie charts and the table, but it contains significant inaccuracies in the data. For example, the percentages for the pie charts are incorrectly reported (e.g., '65 and 50 percent' instead of 72% and 65% for 'both local and international websites'), and the table data is also misrepresented (e.g., '55 and 51 percent' instead of 53% and 57% for lower prices). The overall structure is present, but the inclusion of inaccurate information detracts from the task achievement. To improve, ensure that all data is accurately extracted from the visual information and clearly presented. Focus on correctly identifying the main trends and key features without introducing errors.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is generally well-organized with a clear overall statement and a logical progression from the pie charts to the table. However, there are some minor lapses in cohesion, such as the abrupt transition between the first and second paragraphs. The use of cohesive devices could be more varied and natural to improve the flow. Consider using linking phrases like 'Turning to the table' or 'In contrast' to connect ideas more smoothly.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is adequate and mostly appropriate for the task, with some good attempts at paraphrasing (e.g., 'distribution among surveyed', 'composed one quarter'). However, there are instances of awkward or inaccurate word choices (e.g., 'composed' instead of 'accounted for', 'comprised approximately twice as high'). To improve, focus on using more precise and natural collocations, such as 'accounted for', 'made up', or 'represented'. A wider range of synonyms for describing proportions would also enhance the lexical resource. Pay attention to vocabulary repetition to improve the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report demonstrates a reasonable range of grammatical structures, including comparative forms and complex sentences. However, there are several grammatical errors and awkward phrasings that affect clarity, such as 'the distribution among surveyed' (missing article/noun), 'composed one quarter' (incorrect verb usage), and 'comprised approximately twice as high' (incorrect structure). Punctuation is generally correct, but some sentences are run-on or lack clarity. To improve, pay attention to subject-verb agreement, article usage, and the correct form of comparative structures.

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