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Band 4+: The charts below provide information about the websites where consumers from Australia and New Zealand bought products in 2012, as well as their reasons for online shopping.

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The image includes two pie charts and one table comparing online shopping in Australia and New Zealand. In the Australia pie chart: Local websites - 20%, International websites - 8%, Both local and international websites - 72%. In the New Zealand pie chart: Local websites - 25%, International websites - 10%, Both local and international websites - 65%. The table below lists reasons for online shopping with percentages for Australia and New Zealand respectively: Lower price than physical stores - 53%, 57%; Convenience - 24%, 22%; Quality of products - 18%, 16%; Other reasons - 5%, 5%.

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The graphs gives information about percentage of Australia and New Zealend buyers shopping on overseas and local websites, in 2012.

Overall, in online shopping both countries overseas websites had the highest percentage. However, the reverse was true for both overseas and local websites. Furthernore, the main reason for online shopping was lower prices than in store, and in both countries had the similar pattern.

Looking at pie chart first, in both countries overseas websites was the most popular category, with 65% and 50%. Also, differences between local websites and overseas websites were huge in Australia. However, diferrence between same categories were small in New Zealend. Furthermore, percentages of both local and overseas websites were under 10%.

With regard to table, the main reason was lower prices than in store in both countries with 55% and 51%. Differences between lower prices than in store and better range of products reasons were same with 4%. Other reasons remained the same percentage with 2%. Furthermore, there is one reason, convenience, which had noticeable difference with 8% between two countries.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

websites: 7

overseas: 6

countries: 5

local: 4

between: 4

percentage: 3

shopping: 3

reason: 3

lower: 3

prices: 3

store: 3

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Task Response

The report attempts to address all parts of the task, but there are significant issues with data accuracy and clarity. The overview contains contradictory statements (e.g., stating overseas websites were the highest, then immediately stating the reverse was true), which makes the general trend difficult to follow. Additionally, many of the specific figures cited in the body paragraphs do not align with the provided visual description, which undermines the task achievement. To improve, ensure that the trends identified in the overview are logical and that the data reported in the body paragraphs accurately reflects the values shown in the charts and table.

Coherence & Cohesion

The organization of the report is somewhat logical, but the progression of ideas is often interrupted by confusing phrasing. While you use cohesive devices like 'Overall', 'Furthermore', and 'With regard to', they are sometimes used incorrectly or do not clearly link the ideas. To improve, ensure that each paragraph has a clear central topic and that the sentences within those paragraphs flow logically from one to the next. Avoid using 'However' unless you are presenting a direct contrast to the previous sentence.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is quite limited and repetitive. There are several spelling errors (e.g., 'New Zealend', 'diferrence', 'Furthernore') that detract from the professionalism of the report. Additionally, some word choices are imprecise or confusing, such as 'the reverse was true for both overseas and local websites', which does not clearly convey a mathematical or logical comparison. Try to use a wider range of synonyms for 'percentage', 'show', and 'reason', and focus on accuracy in spelling.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There are frequent grammatical errors that impact the clarity of your message. Issues include subject-verb agreement (e.g., 'The graphs gives'), incorrect article usage, and awkward sentence structures (e.g., 'in both countries had the similar pattern'). Many sentences are difficult to parse on the first reading. To improve, practice constructing complex sentences using subordinate clauses and ensure that your subject and verb always agree in number. Pay close attention to prepositional phrases to ensure they correctly link your data to the subjects.

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