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Band 6+: The charts below show the number of people in Europe who were affected by for types of noise by day and by night in cities and rural areas in 2007. Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisions .

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The image contains two bar charts detailing the number of people in Europe, in millions, affected by four types of noise pollution in cities and rural areas during the day and night in 2007. For cities, the numbers affected were: Traffic (Day: 64, Night: 48), Train (Day: 10, Night: 8), Aircraft (Day: 4, Night: 1), and Industry (Day: 1, Night: 0.25). For rural areas, the numbers were: Traffic (Day: 34, Night: 24), Train (Day: 8, Night: 6), Aircraft (Day: 2, Night: 1), and Industry (Day: 0, Night: 0).

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The table compares the number of European citizens being impacted by four different noises in urban areas and countryside in 2007.

Overall, while the number of affected citizens remained highest for traffic throughout the day, the industry sectors is shown to least influence the residents. Additionally, there is a significant reduction in night time compared to during the day.

To begin with, traffic affected the highest number of people. It recorded at around 68 and 35 millions of people during day time in cities and countryside, respectively. Moreover, the effects of traffic are mitigated at night, showing considerable decline in the number of people being impacted by noise. Similarly, train witnessed a slight decrease rate of about 2 millions people during nighttime and had lower figures in comparison to traffic, with no more than 10 millions people.

In contrast, aircraft and industry sectors are found to have a relatively small impact on residents. The figures for aircrafts in cities and rural areas during the day is 4 and 2 millions people, respectively; while the numbers are the same at 1 millions people at night. Furthermore, it is evident that industry had the lowest number of affected people, with the figures only being no more than 1 million people.

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people: 8

number: 5

millions: 5

traffic: 4

during: 4

being: 3

affected: 3

industry: 3

night: 3

figures: 3

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Task Response

The report effectively addresses the task by summarizing the main features and making comparisons between day and night, as well as between cities and rural areas. The overall trend is clearly identified, and key data points are presented. However, there are some inaccuracies in the data (e.g., traffic day figures are given as 68 and 35 million instead of 64 and 34 million) and minor omissions (e.g., exact night figures for traffic and train are not fully detailed). The report could be improved by ensuring data precision and including all relevant comparisons, such as the specific night-time figures for each noise type. Additionally, the introduction mistakenly refers to a 'table' instead of 'charts,' which is a minor oversight. Overall, the response is well-structured and covers the requirements adequately.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is generally well-organized with a clear overall statement and logical grouping of information. However, there are some minor lapses in coherence, such as the abrupt shift from traffic to train without a clear linking phrase, and the final paragraph could be more smoothly integrated. To improve, use more cohesive devices (e.g., 'Similarly,' 'In contrast,' 'Furthermore') to connect ideas more seamlessly, and ensure each paragraph has a clear central topic.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate and includes some good attempts at paraphrasing (e.g., 'impacted by,' 'mitigated,' 'witnessed a slight decrease'). However, there are some inaccuracies and less natural choices, such as 'the industry sectors is shown to least influence' and 'the effects of traffic are mitigated.' To improve, aim for more precise and natural collocations (e.g., 'the least affected group' instead of 'least influence the residents') and avoid minor errors like 'aircrafts' (should be 'aircraft').

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report uses a mix of simple and complex structures, but there are several grammatical errors that affect clarity, such as subject-verb agreement ('the industry sectors is shown'), incorrect plural forms ('millions of people' should be 'million people'), and tense inconsistency ('is shown' vs. 'recorded'). Punctuation is generally correct. To improve, focus on subject-verb agreement, correct use of singular/plural nouns, and maintaining consistent tense throughout the report.

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