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Band 5+: The charts below show the percentage of time working adults spent on different activities in a particular country in 1958 and 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image contains two pie charts comparing the percentage of time working adults spent on different activities in a particular country in the years 1958 and 2008; for 1958: Working 33%, Relaxing at home 8%, Sleeping 32%, Travel to work 2%, Going out (with friends/family) 19%, Other interests or playing sports 6%; for 2008: Working 42%, Relaxing at home 13%, Sleeping 25%, Travel to work 8%, Going out (with friends/family) 6%, Other interests or playing sports 6%.

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This chart illustrates the rate of time working adults spent on different activities in a particular country in 1958 and 2008

Overall, adults spend the majority of their time each day working at all times. While, going out with friends/family decreased after 50 years in today’s world.

In 1958, the second of most famous activity was sleeping and was about 32 percent. It is still number two in the chart, even though its percentage has dropped. In the 1958,the smallest percentage of a travel to work was 2 percent ,but in 2008 was about 8 % as a going out with friends/family still it was the smallest percentage in the chart.

Conversely, the time spent on sleeping saw a working increase for 33% in 1958 to 42% in 2008. furthermore, relaxing at howe increased from 8% in 1958 to 13% in 2008.

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5.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

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percentage: 3

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Task Response

The report addresses the task and presents some relevant information, but it includes inaccuracies and lacks clear organization. The overview is weak, and the body paragraphs contain some confusing statements and incorrect data. To improve, focus on providing a more accurate and comprehensive overview, organizing the information logically, and ensuring the data cited is correct. Also, pay attention to grammar and sentence structure for clarity. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report demonstrates some attempt at organization, but the flow of ideas is not always logical or easy to follow. The introduction is present, and there's an attempt to provide an overview, but the connections between sentences and paragraphs need improvement. Transitions are weak, and the overall structure could be more cohesive. For example, the shift from discussing sleeping patterns to travel and socializing feels disjointed. Consider using more effective linking words and phrases to guide the reader through the information.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is relatively basic and lacks precision. There are instances of imprecise word choice (e.g., "the second of most famous activity"). Expanding your range of vocabulary and using more specific terms would enhance the report. Focus on using synonyms and varied language to describe trends and data. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors that affect clarity. Examples include incorrect verb tense usage ("adults spend the majority of their time each day working at all times"), awkward phrasing ("Conversely, the time spent on sleeping saw a working increase"), and issues with articles and prepositions. Careful proofreading and a focus on sentence structure are needed to improve grammatical accuracy. Try to use a variety of sentence structures to showcase grammatical range.

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