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Band 5+: The charts below show the performance of a bus company in terms of punctuality, both actual and target (what actually happened compared to what the company was trying to achieve), and the number of complaints from passengers. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image shows two adjacent bar charts comparing data from 1999 to 2003. The left chart illustrates the percentage of trains arriving on time from 1999 to 2003: 1999 (82%), 2000 (85%), 2001 (87%), 2002 (90%), 2003 (93%). The right chart displays the number of complaints per thousand passengers across the same years: 1999 (40), 2000 (38), 2001 (34), 2002 (28), 2003 (24).

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The bar charts depict the percentage of performance punctualy, in terms of actual and target, and the number of complaints from passenger journeys.

Overall, it can be seen that in every year except 2003, the actual performance remained below the target. Custumer of complaints on the other hand, despite a slight fall in 2001, the overall trend showed growth.

Looking at the details, in terms of punctual, the figure was just over 80% in 1999. It incresed slightly to around 82% in 2000, before rising sharply to about 88%in 2002. By 2003, the rate reached the 90%, which was the highest level. Meanwhile target remain steady in 1999 and 2000 at 86%, before plummeting about 85% ,both year 2001 and 2002. By final year accunted for nearly 84%.

Regarding the amount of complaints, the number started just over the 60%. This number rose to around 100 in 2000 . After that at the end of chart complaints consituted 120%, which was the maximum level.

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complaints: 4

target: 3

number: 3

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Task Response

The report attempts to address the task but contains significant inaccuracies and misunderstandings of the data presented in the charts. Key points are misinterpreted, leading to an inaccurate representation of the trends and values. The report needs to accurately reflect the data provided in the charts, focusing on the actual figures and trends for both punctuality and complaints. Improve by carefully analyzing the data before writing, ensuring that the figures and trends mentioned in the report align with what is shown in the charts.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report demonstrates some organization, but the flow of information is disrupted by inaccuracies and a lack of clear connections between ideas. Paragraphing is attempted, but the content within paragraphs sometimes lacks focus. To improve coherence and cohesion, ensure that each paragraph has a clear topic and that sentences within the paragraph logically support that topic. Use cohesive devices (e.g., conjunctions, pronouns, synonyms) to link ideas both within and between paragraphs.

Lexical Resource

The report uses a limited range of vocabulary, and there are instances of inaccuracies in word choice. To enhance lexical resource, try to use a wider variety of vocabulary related to trends, comparisons, and data description. Focus on using synonyms and paraphrasing to avoid repetition. Pay attention to the correct usage of words and collocations to ensure accuracy. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors, including issues with verb tense, subject-verb agreement, and article usage. Sentence structure is relatively simple, and there is limited use of complex grammatical structures. To improve grammatical range and accuracy, focus on reviewing basic grammar rules and practicing sentence construction. Try to incorporate a variety of sentence types (e.g., complex sentences, compound sentences) to demonstrate a wider range of grammatical structures. Proofread carefully to identify and correct errors.

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