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Band 6+: the charts below show the share of the swiss watch market by brand in 2020 and 2021. Summarise the imformation by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

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The image contains two pie charts comparing the Swiss Watch Market share distribution by brand in 2020 and 2021. In 2020, Rolex held 19.4%, Omega 8.8%, Cartier 8.4%, Patek 9.3%, Longines 7.9%, and AP 10%. The following year, Rolex increased to 24.7%, Omega dropped to 8.1%, Cartier rose to 9.8%, Patek to 13.2%, Longines to 7.1%, and AP declined to 8.9%. The remaining market share percentage for other brands is not explicitly stated.

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The pie chart presents the proportion of shares of the Swiss Watch Market by brand between 2020 and 2021.

Overall, Rolex was the most dominant company by far throughout the 2 years study period, and in fact, they increased their share while others have declined.

The three biggest wristwatch manufacturers in 2020 were Rolex, Omega, and Cartier, with 39.5%, 15.6%, and 14.5%, respectively. However, while Rolex increased its share to almost half, Omega saw a notable decrease to 12.7%. Despite a minor change of 0.7% to 13.8% in 2021, Cartier replaced Omega as the second-highest brand of watch in 2021.

The remaining three competitors has a tenth of the proportion in 2020 each, but all fell by around 1% in 2021. Among of the three brands, Patek fell the biggest by having 10.3% in 2020 to 8.8% in 2021. While AP being the smallest sharer in 2020 it went to the fourth largest in 2021.

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