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Band 7+: The charts below show the share of the swiss watch market by brand in 2020 and 2021. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image displays two pie charts comparing six watch brands' market shares for the years 2020 and 2021. In 2020, Rolex 14.9%, Omega 15.6%, Cartier 13.9%, Patek 8.9%, Longines 7.1%, AP 10.1%, other brands 29.5%. In 2021, Rolex 12.7%, Omega 9.1%, Cartier 8.5%, Patek 7.4%, Longines 9.1%, AP 10%, other brands 46.7%.

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The pie charts illustrate the proportion of wristwatch sales by six watchmakers in Switzerland in 2020 and 2021.

Overall, Rolex was the most significant supplier by far in both years. Rolex also increased its dominance whilst all other companies lost market shares.

The three biggest watch manufacturers in 2020 were Rolex, Omega, and Cartier with 39.5%, 15.6%, and 14.5% respectively. However, whilst Rolex increased its share to almost half, Omega saw a notable decrease to 12.7%. Despite a minor decrease of 0.7% to 13.8% in 2021, Cartier replaced Omega as the second-highest watch brand in 2021.

The remaining three competitors had around a tenth of the total in 2020 each, but all fell by around 1% in 2021. Of the three smallest brands, Patek Phillipe fell the most, dropping from 10.3% to 8.8%. Audemars Piguet went from the smallest share in 2020 to the fourth largest in 2021, achieving a percentage of 9.1%.

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Task Response

7.5

The report provides a good overview of the main features of the data, comparing the market shares of six watch brands in 2020 and 2021. However, there are some inaccuracies in the data presented, such as incorrect percentages for some brands.

Coherence & Cohesion

7.5

The report is generally well-organized with clear paragraphing and a logical flow of information. Some minor coherence and cohesion issues are present, such as the inconsistent use of past tense when describing the data.

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6.5

There is a good range of vocabulary used to describe the data. However, there are some inaccuracies and repetitions in the lexical choices, and some imprecise language is used.

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6.5

A variety of sentence structures are attempted, but there are some errors in grammar and punctuation throughout the report. More complex structures could be used to enhance the overall quality of writing.

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