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The image contains two bar charts illustrating 2016 monthly rainfall (mm) for Brasilia and Salvador, Brazil. In Brasilia: Jan 150mm, Feb 130mm, Mar 110mm, Apr 50mm, May 30mm, Jun 10mm, Jul 10mm, Aug 20mm, Sep 50mm, Oct 100mm, Nov 200mm, Dec 250mm. In Salvador: Jan 100mm, Feb 105mm, Mar 140mm, Apr 190mm, May 150mm, Jun 175mm, Jul 175mm, Aug 150mm, Sep 125mm, Oct 150mm, Nov 120mm, Dec 110mm.

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The bar charts compares the average rainwall in different two cities of Brazil, Brasilia and Salvandor, in 2016 during the whole year, while the vertical line illustrate the months and horizon line represents average of rainfall in milimiters.

Starting with Brasilia , both january and december get approximately same rainfall a total number of 200mm each. In July month had a significantly lower number of rain which is lower than 50mm. According to Brasilia , the rainfall fluctuates during the year.

Next, the figures for Salvador, April month had highest number of rainfall, while January month had the lowest which is 100mm.

Overall, that different cities in Brazil , the rainfall represents totally differnt. We can see in Brasilia , the minimum rainfall got in 2 nd season in year ,while in Salvador had highest rainfall in that period.In both cities the average of rainfall remained stable at November month.

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The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses, subject-verb agreement issues, and awkward sentence structures. These errors significantly impede understanding. For example, 'different two cities,' 'January month had the lowest which is 100mm,' and 'the rainfall represents totally differnt' demonstrate a lack of grammatical control. Focus on improving sentence construction and proofreading carefully to minimize errors.

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