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Band 4+: The charts show the results of a survey about what people of different age groups say makes them most happy

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The image contains two pie charts displaying "What makes people most happy" based on a survey with a focus on age groups "people under 30" and "people over 30". For "people under 30", the chart shows "Having a good appearance" at 19%, "Traveling" at 18%, "Achievement at work" at 30%, "Doing hobbies" at 25%, and "Other factors" at 8%. For "people over 30", the chart lists "Being with family" at 32%, "Financial security" at 30%, "Achievement at work" at 24%, "Doing hobbies" at 10%, and "Other factors" at 4%.
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the pie charts illustrates the overall answer to the question what people of particular age groups finds things that makes them most satesfy from the life

Overall, in the both charts achivments at the work makes people happier than other staff, while other factors in the chart appeal to be the least activity that makes people happy

Firstly, in the life of individuals that are under 30 years achivments at the work makes them happier than everything else with 31%. Doing hobbies make youth people happy and it takes second place in the pie chart with 22%, while having gourgious looking stays third in the list with 18% and two least activities that makes adults happy are traveling and other factors with 15% and 14%.

Secondly,achivments at the work appeal to be activity that makes middle adulthood and early adults more happier than other activities with 32%, while doing hobbies make erderly people happy and it takes second place in the pie chart with 24%. Having prety looking is third in the list with 20% while two least activities that makes adults happy are spending time with relatives and other factors with 14% and 10%.

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Overall Band Score

4.5
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Vocabulary Complexity:
C1 - Intricate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A
Vocabulary Repetition:
makes: 7
people: 5
other: 5
while: 4
happy: 4
happier: 3
factors: 3
chart: 3
least: 3
activities: 3
adults: 3
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Task Response

5
The report attempts to address the task but contains inaccuracies and some irrelevant information. The data reported does not always align with the visual description provided. To improve, focus on accurately representing the data from the charts and avoid introducing information not present in the visuals. Also, ensure clarity and accuracy in your descriptions.

Coherence & Cohesion

5
The report's organization is somewhat clear, with an attempt to separate the descriptions of the two charts. However, the flow of information within each paragraph is not always smooth, and the connections between sentences could be improved. The introduction and conclusion are basic and lack depth. Consider using more varied cohesive devices to link ideas and improve the overall flow.

Lexical Resource

5
The vocabulary used is relatively simple and repetitive. There are instances of inaccurate word choice ('staff' instead of 'factors,' 'gourgious looking' instead of 'good appearance,' 'prety looking' instead of 'being with family'). To improve, try to use a wider range of vocabulary and pay closer attention to the precise meaning of words. Paraphrasing could also be used more effectively.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

3
The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses, subject-verb agreement issues, and awkward sentence structures. There are also issues with punctuation. These errors significantly impact the clarity and accuracy of the report. Focus on improving your understanding of basic grammar rules and sentence construction. Proofreading carefully can also help to identify and correct errors.

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