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Band 6+: The diagram below shows how orange juice is produced. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image details an orange juice production flowchart that starts with fresh oranges being delivered to a factory, then washed, followed by the extraction of oranges; waste solids are diverted to animal feed, fresh juice undergoes packaging before traveling to a shop; for concentrate juice production, fresh juice enters evaporation, a refrigerator truck delivers concentrated juice to a warehouse, subsequent packaging at a factory before reaching a shop, with water being added. Left text includes ratings and attributes such as difficulty: "Khó," type: "Process," addressed: "Quá trình sản xuất nước cam," unit: "Không có định," usage: "Thì hiện tại đơn."

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The diagram illustrates the process of manufactoring the orange juice, from harvesting of the oranges to supplying the final products to retailers .Overall, the production process consists of several consecutive stages starting with the collection oranges and ending with making either a fresh juice or concentrate. Notably, after extraction of juice has been finished the process is split into two routs, with one producing fresh juice and the other involving some additional steps to prepare the concentrate.

First, fresh oranges are collected and delivered to a factory, where they are washed and gotten ready for an extraction. The next stage is an extraction, after it has been completed there are shown two ways, one is – the final product in the form of fresh juice is packaged and transported to shops, and the other is making a concentrate. Meanwhine is illustrated that received solid waste is used for feeding animals.

Next stage is a producing a concentrate which involves the following steps: the orange juice is transported in refrigerator truck to the place where it undergo the evaporation process, after that the concentrate is canned and delivered to warehouse, afterwards in the factory water is added to concentrate. Finally, it has been packed and is supplied to final consumers.

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juice: 6

concentrate: 5

process: 4

fresh: 4

oranges: 3

final: 3

after: 3

extraction: 3

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Task Response

The report provides a clear and logical overview of the orange juice production process, correctly identifying the two main routes (fresh and concentrate) and the key stages. The structure is coherent, with a good introduction and overall summary. However, there are some inaccuracies and omissions in the details: the order of evaporation and refrigerated transport is reversed, and the step of adding water is placed after warehousing instead of before packaging. Additionally, there are minor spelling and grammatical errors (e.g., 'manufactoring', 'routs', 'Meanwhine', 'undergo') that slightly affect clarity. To improve, ensure the sequence of steps is accurately described and proofread for language errors.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a logical structure and uses some cohesive devices, but there are noticeable lapses in coherence and cohesion. The flow is sometimes disrupted by awkward phrasing and unclear referencing (e.g., 'Meanwhine is illustrated that...'). Paragraphing is not effectively managed, as the second paragraph combines multiple stages without clear separation. To improve, use clearer topic sentences and ensure each paragraph focuses on a distinct stage or set of stages. Also, use a wider range of cohesive devices (e.g., 'while', 'whereas', 'subsequently') to enhance the logical progression.

Lexical Resource

The report uses some appropriate vocabulary related to the process (e.g., 'extraction', 'evaporation', 'concentrate'), but there are several inaccuracies and limited range. Words like 'manufactoring' (should be 'manufacturing'), 'routs' (should be 'routes'), and 'Meanwhine' (should be 'Meanwhile') are incorrect. The phrasing is sometimes unnatural (e.g., 'gotten ready for an extraction'). To improve, expand your range of process-related vocabulary and ensure correct spelling and word forms. Use more precise terms and avoid informal or incorrect expressions.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains a number of grammatical errors and punctuation issues that affect clarity. There are subject-verb agreement errors (e.g., 'it undergo' should be 'it undergoes'), incorrect verb forms (e.g., 'has been finished' should be 'is finished'), and missing articles (e.g., 'the collection oranges' should be 'the collection of oranges'). The use of passive voice is inconsistent, and some sentences are overly complex or unclear. To improve, focus on using a wider range of grammatical structures accurately, such as the passive voice consistently for processes, and ensure correct punctuation and sentence boundaries. Proofreading for common errors would also help.

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