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Band 5+: The diagram shows how to make jam from the fruit. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

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The image outlines the process of making jam, starting with 4 kg of fruit washed under running water, mashed, combined with 2 tbsp of peanuts, 1/4 cup sugar, and 1 cup water, then heated at high temperature for 10 minutes. The mixture is then combined with 2 cups more sugar and 4 cups water, heated at high temperature for half an hour, poured into containers, sealed, and kept for one hour before being consumed by a family at breakfast.

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The flow chart illustrates the process 1) of producing jam from fruits 2) by which fruit jam is produced.

Overall, the given diagram consists of fruits thoroughly being washed, mixed with other ingredients and delivered to families to enjoy. A range of special equipments and several extra products such as peanuts, sugar and water are required to complete this process.

The first stage begins with running water into the container with 4kg of fruits. After being washed, fruits are mashed with special tool. Having completed the mashing stage, the container is put onto the cooker/oven at high temperature for 10 minutes at the same time all additional products () are added into the liquid. The proportions of ingredients are – 2tbsp of peanuts, a quarter of cup of sugar and a cup of water, all being mixed with ladle

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

fruits: 4

being: 3

water: 3

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Task Response

5.5

The report adequately addresses the task by summarizing the main stages of jam production. However, it could benefit from a more comprehensive overview of the entire process and a clearer comparison of different stages or ingredients. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report demonstrates some coherence, but the flow of information could be improved. The organization of ideas and the use of cohesive devices need further refinement to enhance clarity and readability. The presence of grammatical errors impacts the overall coherence.

Lexical Resource

5.5

The report uses a satisfactory range of vocabulary, but more precise and sophisticated language could be employed to enhance the description of the process and ingredients. Some vocabulary choices are slightly inaccurate or inappropriate.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

4.5

The report contains grammatical errors that affect the clarity and fluency of the writing. Improving grammatical accuracy and range would significantly enhance the overall quality of the report.

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Band 5+: The diagram shows how to make jam from the fruit. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

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