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Band 5+: The diagrams below are existing and proposed floor plans for the redevelopment of an art gallery. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image shows two floor plans labeled "Existing Plan" and "Proposed Plan." In the Existing Plan, from left to right, there is "Not Part of Existing Gallery," "Temporary Exhibition Space," "Permanent Exhibition Space," "Lobby," and "Office," with an entrance marked on the right. In the Proposed Plan, starting from the left, there is an "Exhibition Store," "Special Exhibition Space," "Permanent Exhibition Space," an entrance in the same place as before, an "Education Area," and a "Store/Plant" area. The layouts maintain the same structural footprint while redistributing space functions.

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The diagram illustrate the current and future floor layouts for the restructure of an art gallery.

Overall the art gallery will change according to proposed plans .There will be completely new entrance and more spaces for exhibitions.

According to the current layouts of art gallery,the entrance leads to the lobby.There is an office on the left side of the lobby.Furthermore the lobby then open into two temporary and one permanent space.The parkinson court are opposite to these areas.The large empty space on the left side of permanent area that currently not a part of art gallery.

However, looking at the future plan,the lobby and office will be no longer they convert into education area and store/plant respectively.Also the permanent space will be extended by replacing both temporary sites.Additionally, the new entrance to the art gallery will be from parkinson court site.The not part of existing gallery transform into special exhibition space.

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Task Response

The report provides a general overview of the changes to the art gallery, but it lacks specific details and accurate comparisons. The description of the existing layout is somewhat clear, but the proposed layout description is less so. The report could benefit from more precise language and a clearer structure to improve coherence. To improve, focus on providing more specific details about the changes, using comparative language effectively, and ensuring the description of the proposed plan is as clear as the existing plan.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report presents a reasonable overview of the changes, but the organization could be improved. The flow of information is somewhat disjointed, and the transitions between describing the existing and proposed plans are not always smooth. Consider using more explicit linking words and phrases to guide the reader. Paragraphing is adequate but could be refined to better group related information.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is generally appropriate but lacks sophistication. There is some repetition of basic words like 'space' and 'area.' Try to incorporate a wider range of synonyms and more precise terminology related to floor plans and gallery layouts. For example, instead of 'large empty space,' you could use 'an expansive area currently external to the gallery.'

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors that affect clarity. Common errors include incorrect verb tenses ('diagram illustrate'), missing articles ('the restructure'), and awkward phrasing ('will be no longer they convert'). Focus on improving sentence structure and ensuring subject-verb agreement. Proofread carefully to catch these errors.

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