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Band 4+: The diagrams below show the average cost of 3 different types of media device over a period of 6 years, plus their payment method for these devices according to 4 age groups in 2020.

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The image contains two graphs, the first titled "Average cost of one item (USD)" depicts a dotted line graph showing a declining trend from 2020 to 2026, for Mobile Phones starting at $2,500, Laptop at $3,000, and Television at $2,000. The second graph titled "Payment Method (%)" is a stacked horizontal bar chart with age groups on the vertical axis and percentage on the horizontal axis, detailing three payment methods: Other, Payment Plan, and Outright. For ages 60+ years, Other is under 10%, Payment Plan around 70%, and Outright around 20%. Ages 40-59 years, Other is under 10%, Payment Plan around 60%, and Outright around 30%. Ages 26-39 years, Other under 10%, Payment Plan slightly over 50%, and Outright around 40%. Ages 18-25 years, Other under 10%, Payment Plan around 45%, and Outright over 40%.

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The line graph illustrates about amount of plastic waste which generated in four countries such as China, The USA, The EU, and India from 2000 to 2020.

Overall, there were rising trends in the quantity of plastic waste made in China and India, while the opposite was true for The USA and The EU. Notably, China created the most plastic waste between others country.

Focusing on upward trends. China started at 20 in 2000 and rose steadily year by year, reaching at highest point to 160 by 2020. As for India. In 2000, it generated 18 amount of plastic waste, after, this figure increased from 19 to 80 between 2002 and 2020.

By contrast. The USA’s generation began at 80 million tonnes in 2000, subsequently, the figure fell to 60 million tonnes by 2020. When it comes to The EU, the amount of plastic trash which produced was 59 million tonnes in 2000 and declined gradually year by year, reaching at 30 in 2020.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

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plastic: 5

waste: 4

china: 4

amount: 3

india: 3

million: 3

tonnes: 3

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Task Response

The report fails to address the provided visual information. There is a complete mismatch between the data described in the [visual description] (which concerns the cost of electronics and payment methods) and the data presented in the [report] (which discusses plastic waste in various countries). While the report is internally consistent in its attempt to describe a graph about plastic waste, it does not respond to the task as defined by the visual input. To improve, ensure that the report accurately reflects the specific data, trends, and categories presented in the provided charts.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report follows a logical structure with an introduction, overview, and body paragraphs. However, the cohesion is significantly hindered by the incorrect use of punctuation. There are several instances where full stops are used instead of commas (e.g., 'As for India. In 2000...' and 'By contrast. The USA's...'), which creates fragmented sentences and disrupts the flow of information. To improve, ensure that transitional phrases are correctly integrated into sentences using commas rather than being treated as standalone sentences.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is functional but repetitive and occasionally imprecise. Phrases like 'amount of plastic waste which generated' and '18 amount of plastic waste' are awkward and grammatically incorrect. There is an attempt to use varied terms like 'quantity', 'trash', and 'figure', but the phrasing often lacks the sophistication required for higher bands. Aim to use more natural collocations, such as 'the production of plastic waste' or 'the volume of waste generated', and avoid repetitive structures. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Grammatical errors are frequent and impact the clarity of the report. There are issues with sentence structure (fragmented sentences), preposition usage (e.g., 'reaching at highest point to 160'), and relative clauses (e.g., 'plastic trash which produced'). The writer needs to focus on subject-verb agreement and the correct use of passive voice (e.g., 'waste which was produced'). Practicing complex sentence structures and ensuring correct punctuation will help improve the overall accuracy.

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