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Band 4+: The diagrams below show the changes that have taken place at Queen Mary Hospital since its construction in 1960. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image depicts a progression of land use over three time periods: 1960, 1980, and 2000; in 1960, a Shopping Centre and Farmland are adjacent to a Hospital which is above a Car Park; in 1980, a Cancer Centre replaces the Shopping Centre and a Pharmacy is added next to the Hospital, with a Nursing School replacing Farmland, all maintaining the Car Park's position; by 2000, the Pharmacy has expanded in size, overshadowing the diminished Cancer Centre, with the Nursing School also larger and the Car Park unchanged.

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The maip illustrate the Scenario of Queen Mary hospital for three particular years:1960 1980, und 2000.

overall, it is clear there were many department constructed like Cencer Centex, pharmacy, und nursing school. Shoping centex and farmland were domolished.

In terms of the changes that have been taken Place, in 1960, the hospital was buit near to a main road and past to a shopping Centers. There was a car park behind the hospital, while farmland located behind the shopping center in 1980, shopping centre was demolished and it had been replaced two parts cancer center and pharmacy ,while farmland had been Convented into nursing School. There were no changes in hospital and car park.

It can be seen from the maps in 2000 year, Nursing school and Cax park have been reduced by half, where Cencer Center has been enlarged there are no changes in hospital and pharmacy.the main road remained Unchanged From 1960 to R000.

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hospital: 5

there: 4

nursing: 3

school: 3

farmland: 3

changes: 3

shopping: 3

center: 3

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The report provides a good overview of the changes, but some details are missing or inaccurate. The report could be improved by providing more specific information about the changes, such as the size and location of the new buildings.

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The report uses a range of vocabulary, but some of the words are not used accurately. The report could be improved by using more precise and sophisticated vocabulary.

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