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Band 6+: The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average British household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main fea- tures, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image contains two pie charts. The first chart, "British Household Energy Use," displays data as follows: Heating 42%, Water heating 30%, Other appliances 15%, Lighting 7%, Refrigeration 4%, and Cooling 2%. The second chart, "British Household Greenhouse Gas Emissions," presents data as follows: Heating 15%, Water heating 32%, Other appliances 28%, Lighting 8%, Refrigeration 14%, and Cooling 3%.

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The first pie chart illustrates information regarding the consumption of energy in an average home in British. The second pie cart depicts the proportion amount of greenhouse gas emissions which are produced.

Overall, it is clear that in both charts cooling contributes to by far the least consumption of whole energy. In addition, the greatest proportion of energy in a British household is consumed by heating water.

In terms of how energy is consumed, the greatest proportion of energy consumption is heating at just 42%. Cooling had the least proportion of energy usage in British households at 2%. Lighting and refrigeration are the second least percentage of energy use, making up 4% and 7% subsequently. Water heating requires 30%, while other appliance and gadgets only need the half of that.

Turning to the British household’s greenhouse gas emission, cooling again require by far the least proportion at 3%. Then , lighting is responsible for 8%, and refrigeration and heating contribute almost identical proportion with 14% and 15% respectively. Next, other appliances make up the second most proportion at 28% approximately is doubled consumption in the previous chart

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The report covers the main features of both pie charts and makes relevant comparisons. There are some minor inaccuracies in the data reported (e.g., "the greatest proportion of energy in a British household is consumed by heating water" is incorrect). To improve, ensure data accuracy and vary sentence structure more.

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The report demonstrates an adequate attempt to organize the information, but there are some issues with flow and clarity. The introduction is acceptable, but the overview could be more concise and impactful. The body paragraphs present the data, but the connections between sentences and ideas could be strengthened. Transitions between paragraphs are present but could be smoother to improve the overall coherence. Consider using more varied cohesive devices to link ideas and improve the logical flow of information.

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The report uses a range of vocabulary relevant to the task, but there are instances where word choice could be more precise. For example, using 'proportion' repeatedly can be replaced with synonyms like 'percentage' or 'share' to add variety. While the vocabulary is generally appropriate, there's room to enhance the sophistication and accuracy of word usage. Focus on expanding your vocabulary related to data analysis and environmental impact to improve lexical resource.

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The report demonstrates a mix of simple and complex sentence structures, but grammatical errors and phrasing issues impact clarity. There are errors in article usage ('in British' should be 'in Britain' or 'in a British household'), subject-verb agreement, and sentence construction. While the overall meaning is understandable, these errors detract from the report's credibility. Focus on reviewing basic grammar rules and practicing sentence construction to improve accuracy. Pay attention to punctuation and ensure that sentences are grammatically sound.

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