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Band 4+: The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average British household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main fea- tures, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image contains two pie charts. The first chart, "British Household Energy Use," displays data as follows: Heating 42%, Water heating 30%, Other appliances 15%, Lighting 7%, Refrigeration 4%, and Cooling 2%. The second chart, "British Household Greenhouse Gas Emissions," presents data as follows: Heating 15%, Water heating 32%, Other appliances 28%, Lighting 8%, Refrigeration 14%, and Cooling 3%.

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The two pie chart illustrate informations about used the energy in particular country household and emission of greenhouse house gas.

Overall,it is clear that this country’s people consume large amount of energy for heating,while water heater also considered larger proportion of greenhouse gas.Additionally, cooling consume low energy and emission low number of gas.

British’s energy consumption,the largest amount used by heating in 42% and similarly another water heater used 30% of total energy. Consequently,15% power used by other appliances,and refrigerator use of of this only 7%.However, cooling system and light are only used less than 5%.

Household gas emissions,32% emission occured by water heating,which was the significant contribution for greenhouse gas.The impect of other appliances was 28%,while the impact of refrigerator was half this in14%.Another heating gas emissions was 15%.Finally, lighting and cooling were emitted low in 8% and 3% respectively.

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energy: 5

emission: 3

greenhouse: 3

water: 3

cooling: 3

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Task Response

The report covers the requirements of the task, presenting the main features of both pie charts and making relevant comparisons. There are some minor grammatical errors and awkward phrasing, but the overall meaning is clear. To improve, focus on using more precise language and varying sentence structure. Also, ensure accurate use of articles and prepositions. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report demonstrates an attempt to organize the information into paragraphs, but the flow of ideas is not always smooth. The introduction and overview are present, but the connections between sentences and ideas within paragraphs could be strengthened. Transitions between paragraphs could also be improved to enhance coherence. Consider using more varied cohesive devices to link ideas and improve the overall flow.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is relatively basic and lacks the precision required for a higher score. There are instances of inaccurate word choice ('impect' instead of 'impact'). To improve, focus on expanding your vocabulary related to energy consumption and environmental impact. Use a wider range of synonyms and more precise language to describe the data.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses, subject-verb agreement issues, and incorrect article usage. Sentence structure is often awkward and unclear. To improve, focus on mastering basic grammar rules and sentence structures. Proofread carefully for errors in verb tense, subject-verb agreement, and article usage. Practice writing complex sentences correctly to demonstrate a wider range of grammatical structures.

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