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Band 5+: The first chart below shows the number of British visitors to the US and American visitors to the UK from 2011 to 2015. The second chart shows the spent by those visitors in that period. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image displays two bar charts: the first depicts UK tourists to the US and US tourists to the UK from 2011 to 2015 in millions; UK tourists: 2011 - 2.8, 2012 - 3.1, 2013 - 3.4, 2014 - 3.5, 2015 - 3.2; US tourists: 2011 - 2.5, 2012 - 2.6, 2013 - 2.8, 2014 - 3.0, 2015 - 2.9. The second chart illustrates the amount spent by these tourists in USD billions in the same years; UK tourists: 2011 - 4.5, 2012 - 4.8, 2013 - 5.2, 2014 - 5.5, 2015 - 5.3; US tourists: 2011 - 3.8, 2012 - 4.0, 2013 - 4.2, 2014 - 4.5, 2015 - 6.0.

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The first chart illustrates the number of British visitors to the USA and American tourists who visited the UK from 2011 to 2015.The secong chart gives information about sum spent by those people in that period.

Overall,both the number of visitors and the amount of money they spent increased in both graphs between 2011 and 2015. Moreover, UK tourists spent more money than US people throughout the period.

In terms of tourists numbers,around 3.3 millon British people came to the USA in 2011, compared with approximately 2.8 million American residents visiting the UK. The figures were most indentical in 2012, around 3 million.After that,both numbers increased ,reaching 3.4 and 2.9 in 2014.

In detail,the amount of money spent by Britains recorded the highest figure through the whole period.The sum for Britian people was significantly rising from 3.9 to 5.9 millions.While the amount spent by US tourits was gradually changing.In 2015 Britian’s expenses made up the largest level about 5.9 million in contrast with US the figures shew 4 million.

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spent: 5

people: 4

tourists: 3

amount: 3

money: 3

million: 3

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Task Response

The report addresses the main requirements of the task and provides an overview of the trends. However, there are several inaccuracies in data reporting that affect the clarity of the comparison. For instance, the figures provided for British spending and the specific numbers for visitor counts do not consistently align with the provided data. Additionally, there are some grammatical errors and spelling mistakes (e.g., 'secong', 'indentical', 'Britains', 'shew') that, while they do not prevent understanding, detract from the overall professional quality. To improve, ensure that all data points are transcribed accurately from the charts and focus on refining sentence structure and spelling.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report follows a logical structure with an introduction, overview, and body paragraphs. However, the progression of ideas is sometimes interrupted by abrupt transitions and punctuation errors (e.g., missing spaces after periods). To improve, ensure that each sentence flows naturally into the next using a wider variety of cohesive devices. Some sentences are fragmented, such as the one starting with 'While...', which should be attached to the preceding or following clause to form a complete thought.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is functional but limited and contains several spelling errors (e.g., 'secong', 'indentical', 'Britains', 'tourits', 'shew'). There is also some repetitive use of basic words like 'number' and 'amount'. To reach a higher band, aim for more precise academic vocabulary and ensure correct spelling of key terms. For example, instead of 'the sum for Britian people', you could use 'expenditure by British travelers'.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report demonstrates a mix of simple and complex structures, but grammatical errors are frequent and occasionally impede clarity. There are issues with subject-verb agreement, article usage, and sentence fragments. For instance, 'the amount of money spent by Britains recorded' is phrased awkwardly. Focus on mastering sentence boundaries and ensuring that complex sentences (using 'while', 'although', etc.) are grammatically complete. Pay close attention to the correct use of pluralization and possessives.

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