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Band 6+: The following diagram shows steps in producing wine in a small winery. Summarize the information by reporting the main steps.

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The image outlines a linear wine production process: Workers/machinery involved in harvesting grapes from vineyards, collecting grapes in containers, washing grapes/removing leaves and stems, crushing by a presser/adding yeast, fermenting in oak barrels for 2 months, bottling/labeling, and transporting to warehouse.

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The given diagram illustrates how wine is manufactured in a small winery.

Looking from an overall perspective, it can be readily apparent that there are 8 main stages in the process of wine, beginning with the collection of grapes and ending with the delivery to warehouse.

At the first satge of process, workers and machinery are utilized to harvest grapes from vineyards, and then gathering it in a box. After that, they wash grpaes with clean water and remove leaves as well as stems from vines before grapes are crushed by a presser.

At this point, yeast is added into the grape juice so that it is fermented. The juice is poured into barrels which are made from oak and kept in it for 2 months to be completely fermented. When the wine is ready, it is poured into bottles that are labelled. Finally, it is shipped to the storage by truck.

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Overall Band Score

6.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

grapes: 3

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Task Response

The report accurately covers all stages of wine production. Minor inaccuracies and omissions do not detract from the overall understanding of the process.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is generally well-organized and easy to follow. However, some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing affect the overall flow and coherence.

Lexical Resource

6.5

The report uses a range of vocabulary appropriate for the task. While mostly accurate, some lexical choices could be improved for greater precision and naturalness.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

5.5

The report demonstrates a range of grammatical structures, but several errors affect the accuracy and fluency. Improvement in grammar is needed to achieve a higher score.

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