Bar Chart

Band 6+: The golf below shows changes in the percentage of household with cars in one European country between 1971 and 2001.

See all user-written answers on this topic

Image for topic: The golf below shows changes in the percentage of household with cars in one European country between 1971 and 2001.

Our system will evaluate the answer based on this AI-generated description.

The image displays a bar graph showing the percentage of households with cars in a European country for 1971, 1981, 1991, and 2001, categorized by 'No car', '1 car', and '2 or more cars'. In 1971, the distribution was: No car, approximately 47%; 1 car, 35%; and 2 or more cars, approximately 16%. For 1981, the figures were: No car, approximately 42%; 1 car, approximately 31%; and 2 or more cars, approximately 28%. In 1991, the percentages were: No car, 30%; 1 car, approximately 47%; and 2 or more cars, approximately 21%. Finally, in 2001, the data shows: No car, approximately 28%; 1 car, approximately 43%; and 2 or more cars, approximately 28%.

Given the complexity of the image, the above description may not be entirely accurate.

Skyrocket your IELTS band score by 1-2 points in under a month with our premium plan!

Check it out

Note: Both the topic and the answer were created by one of our users.

The graph shows the proportion of households who having one, two cars, or not having in a European country in the period between 1971 and 2001.

Overall, the proportion of householders without cars decreased over time, while the percentage of householders with one car reached its peak in the year 1991, and having two cars category was unstable throughout the period.

Householders who didn’t had a car recorded the highest rate at the beginning, recording more than 45 percent, then this value decreased to 42 percent in 1981, and falling sharply to 30 percent in 1991, and reaching 28 percent at the end.

Secondly we can see that, householders owning one car group recorded 35 percent in 1971, then declined to 31 percent in 1981. In contrast the year 1991 recorded the highest proportion for this group, which its value jumped to 47 percent, although it decreased in 2001 but remined higher, accounting for 43 percent.

Finally, householders with two cars their category was unstable, recording the lowest percentage in 1971 at 16 percent, then rise dramatically to 28 percent in 1981, after that decreased significantly to 21 percent in 1991, to increase again in 2001, accounting for 28 percent as no car group.

Word Count: 204

Check Your Answer On This Topic?

Check My Answer

Generate A Band-9 Sample Answer?

Generate A Sample

Overall Band Score

(+/- 0.5)

Vocabulary Complexity:
C1 - Intricate
Strive to incorporate even richer and more precise language.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

percent: 11

householders: 4

decreased: 4

proportion: 3

having: 3

recorded: 3

group: 3

Try using synonyms for the above words

Task Response

The report effectively addresses the task by describing the main trends and changes in car ownership over the given period. The overall structure is clear, with an introduction, an overview, and detailed paragraphs for each category. However, there are some grammatical errors and awkward phrasings (e.g., 'who having one, two cars, or not having', 'who didn't had a car', 'remined higher') that slightly affect clarity. Additionally, the data descriptions are generally accurate, though minor inaccuracies (e.g., 'more than 45 percent' instead of 'approximately 47%') are present. To improve, focus on grammatical accuracy and smoother phrasing.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a clear overall structure with an introduction, an overview, and paragraphs for each car category. However, the flow is sometimes disrupted by awkward phrasing and minor lapses in cohesion. For example, the phrase 'Secondly we can see that' is informal and could be replaced with a more cohesive transition. Additionally, the final paragraph could be better linked to the previous one. To improve, use a wider range of cohesive devices (e.g., 'In contrast', 'Similarly') and ensure each paragraph focuses on a clear main idea with smooth connections between sentences.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is adequate for the task, with some good attempts at paraphrasing (e.g., 'proportion of households', 'recorded the highest rate'). However, there are several inaccuracies and awkward expressions, such as 'householders who didn't had a car', 'householders owning one car group', and 'their category was unstable'. The range of vocabulary is somewhat limited, and some terms are repeated (e.g., 'recording', 'accounting for'). To improve, aim for more precise and natural collocations (e.g., 'the percentage of households without a car', 'the figure for one-car households') and avoid redundant phrasing.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors that affect clarity, such as 'who having' (should be 'who had'), 'didn't had' (should be 'didn't have'), 'remined' (should be 'remained'), and 'rise' (should be 'rose'). There is some variety in sentence structures, but errors in tense consistency and subject-verb agreement are noticeable. Punctuation is generally correct, but some sentences are run-on or awkwardly constructed. To improve, focus on using past tense consistently for describing data, and practice forming complex sentences with accurate grammar. Proofreading for common errors would also help.

Answers On The Same Topic:

The golf below shows changes in the percentage of household with cars in one European country between 1971 and 2001.

The bar graph illustrates the difference in the rates of households who owns cars in a singular european country from 1971 and 2001. Overall, the number of households with no cars experienced a downward trend between 1971 and 2001. Meanwhile, both households who own 1 car and households who have 2 or more cars, fluctuated […]

Band 6+

The golf below shows changes in the percentage of household with cars in one European country between 1971 and 2001.

The graph shows changes in the percentage of household with cars in one European country between 1971 and 2001. Overall, the visual data present the changes in three factors for household having no car, 1 car and 2 or more cars. The presented data consist of years 1971, 1981, 1991 and 2001 of one European […]

Band 6+

The golf below shows changes in the percentage of household with cars in one European country between 1971 and 2001.

The bar chart illustrates how percentage of car ownerships per households change in a particular Eurapuean country from 1971 to 2001. Overall, in 1971 the most of the households owned a car, however it is changed over the period. The number of housoholds which owned two or more cars is flactuated. In 2001 generally families […]

Band 5+

The golf below shows changes in the percentage of household with cars in one European country between 1971 and 2001.

The bar chart demonstrates how the share of families that owned at least one car evolved in one European country over the thirty-years period from 1971 to 2001. It is measured in percentages. Overall, in 1971 the largest propotion was recorded for families with no cars, just as in 1983. However, in 1991 the percentage […]

Band 6+

See All

The bar chart below shows the divorce rates in two European countries from 2011 to 2015. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparision where relevant

The bar chart illustrates the divorce rate in Finland and Sweden between 2011 and 2015. Overall,Sweden experienced a downward trend,while Finland showed an upward trend through the period.Although Finland intially had a lower rate but,in the end,it outraced Sweden.Both countries had some fluctuations. According to the table,in 2011,,he divorce rate in Sweden was 45%,approximately,By the […]

Band 4+

The bar chart below shows the divorce rates in two European countries from 2011 to 2015. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparision where relevant

The bar chart illustrates the divorce rate in finland and sweden between 2011 and 2015. Overall,Sweden experienced a downward trend,while Finland showed an upward trend throught the period.Although finland intially had a lower rate but in the end,it outraced Sweden.Both countries had some fluctuations. According to the table,in 2011,the divorce rate of Sweden was 45%,approximately.By […]

Band 4+

the bar chart below shows the number of students who chose certain subjects in 2005

The bar illustrates the number of male and female students who chose eight different university subjects in 2005. Overall, Sciences and Social Sciences were by far the most popular subjects for male and female students, whereas languages for men and Mathematics for women were much less preferred. Starting with the most popular types of subjects. […]

Band 5+

The chart below shows the main reasons for deforestation in three different regions of the world during two separate decades. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart illustrates the primary causes of deforestation in South America, Southeast Asia, and Central Africa from 1990 to 2000 and from 2010 to 2020. Overall, cattle ranching was the highest percentage cause of deforestation in South America, while commercial agriculture was the reason for deforestation in Southeast Asia. Moreover, subsistence farming was the cause […]

Band 7+

the bar chart below shows the number of students who chose certain subjects in 2005

The bar chart illustrates the amount of male and female pupils who chose eight different types of university subjects in 2005. Overall, more males than females chose Science, Mathematics, Literature and Law, while females were more interested in Social Sciences, Languages and the arts. Humanities was the only subject chosen by an equal number of […]

Band 7+

See All

Band 6+: The golf below shows changes in the percentage of household with cars in one European country between 1971 and 2001.

Check Your Answer On This Topic?

Generate A Band-9 Sample Answer?

Overall Band Score

Task Response

Coherence & Cohesion

Lexical Resource

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Answers On The Same Topic:

The golf below shows changes in the percentage of household with cars in one European country between 1971 and 2001.

The golf below shows changes in the percentage of household with cars in one European country between 1971 and 2001.

The golf below shows changes in the percentage of household with cars in one European country between 1971 and 2001.

The golf below shows changes in the percentage of household with cars in one European country between 1971 and 2001.

Other Topics:

The bar chart below shows the divorce rates in two European countries from 2011 to 2015. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparision where relevant

The bar chart below shows the divorce rates in two European countries from 2011 to 2015. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparision where relevant

the bar chart below shows the number of students who chose certain subjects in 2005

The bar chart below shows the number of international tourists (in millions) visiting five cities in 2010 and 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the main reasons for deforestation in three different regions of the world during two separate decades. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

the bar chart below shows the number of students who chose certain subjects in 2005

Check Your Answer On This Topic?

Generate A Band-9 Sample Answer?

Overall Band Score

Task Response

Coherence & Cohesion

Lexical Resource

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Answers On The Same Topic:

Other Topics:

Plans & Pricing

Free

Premium