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Band 5+: The graph and chart give information about the migration to the UK between 2000 and 2008. The line graph shows the intended length of stay of immigrants. The pie chart shows the reasons for migration to the UK in 2008.

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The image comprises two sections: a line graph and a pie chart. The line graph depicts the intended length of stay (less than 2 months, 2 to 12 months, and more than 12 months) of immigrants in the UK from 2000 to 2008. In 2000, the figures were approximately: less than 2 months - 40,000; 2 to 12 months - around 82,000; more than 12 months - 100,000. By 2004, these figures increased to: less than 2 months - 50,000; 2 to 12 months - around 78,000; more than 12 months - 170,000. The peak in 2007 showed: less than 2 months - 70,000; 2 to 12 months - around 95,000; more than 12 months - 160,000. In 2008, numbers were: less than 2 months - 70,000; 2 to 12 months - 85,000; more than 12 months - 130,000. The pie chart displays reasons for migration to the UK in 2008: Work - 38%; Study - 32%; Accompany/join family members - 15%; Other reasons - 7%; No reasons stated - 8%.

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The caharts presented provided data on UK migration from 2000 to 2008. The line graph illustrates information about how long immigrants intend to stay, while pie charts illustrates the motivation for migration.

Overall, it is clear that the number of immigrants staying for 4 or more years remained unchanged over an eight-year period, whereas most of the immigrants lasted up to two years. In addition, main reason for migration was study and work.

Looking at the line graph in more detail, the number of immigrants intented to stay up to 2 years and 4 or more years started at the same point, 150,000 people in 2000. The number of individuals intented to short stays increased over the period, reaching 250,000 in 2004 and remained almost stable over the next four year. The figure of people planned to stay up two to four years experienced downward and upward fluctuations, when rose gradually and reached 100,000 end of the period.

In 2008, a significant proportion of immigrants migrated for work and study, relatively 38% and 32%. Remaining 16% of immigrants moved because of accompany and visiting family. Moreover, other 7% of people had other reasons, while other 7% stated no reason.

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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

immigrants: 6

years: 5

number: 3

people: 3

other: 3

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Task Response

The report attempts to address the task but contains significant inaccuracies and omissions. The overall trend is misrepresented (e.g., 'staying for 4 or more years remained unchanged' is incorrect; the data shows fluctuations). The line graph description includes incorrect figures and categories (e.g., '4 or more years' instead of 'more than 12 months', and 'up to 2 years' instead of 'less than 2 months'). The pie chart data is partially correct but includes an error in the 'accompany/join family' percentage (stated as 16% instead of 15%) and repeats 'other 7%' for both 'other reasons' and 'no reason stated' (the latter should be 8%). To improve, ensure accurate representation of all data categories and values, and provide a clearer overview of the main trends.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a clear overall structure with an introduction, overview, and body paragraphs. However, the flow is sometimes disrupted by unclear referencing and abrupt transitions. For example, the phrase 'the number of immigrants lasted up to two years' is confusing, and the shift from the line graph to the pie chart could be smoother. The paragraphing is adequate but could be improved by more clearly separating the analysis of the line graph and the pie chart. To enhance coherence, use clearer topic sentences and ensure each paragraph focuses on a single main idea.

Lexical Resource

The report uses some appropriate vocabulary related to the topic, such as 'intended to stay', 'migration', and 'proportion'. However, there are several inaccuracies and awkward phrasings, such as 'caharts' (charts), 'intented' (intended), and 'relatively' (should be 'respectively'). The range of vocabulary is limited, and some expressions are not natural (e.g., 'lasted up to two years' instead of 'stayed for up to two years'). To improve, use a wider range of precise and natural vocabulary, and ensure correct word forms and collocations.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors that affect clarity and accuracy. Examples include subject-verb agreement issues ('pie charts illustrates'), incorrect verb forms ('intented', 'planned to stay up two to four years'), and missing articles ('main reason' should be 'the main reason'). Sentence structures are often awkward or incomplete, and punctuation is sometimes incorrect. To improve, focus on using a wider range of sentence structures with accurate grammar, and proofread carefully to eliminate basic errors.

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Band 5+: The graph and chart give information about the migration to the UK between 2000 and 2008. The line graph shows the intended length of stay of immigrants. The pie chart shows the reasons for migration to the UK in 2008.

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